Knock Knock Freestyle (60+ Bars)

[watsxgood]

http://usershare.net/r7u33hb0qja3

Let me know what you think yall..

[Inept]

Yep, dope man. Very solid. That's what's up!

[watsxgood]

good looks kid..

[C^Mil]

i like the lyrics, but i feel you need to work on the delivery, but that also can be me not used to hearin you flow or your mic. Sound a lil too preppy for the tough talk, but ims ure you'll bring new shit real soon.. 6.9/10

[watsxgood]

Well I didn't talk tough through out that whole joint but regardless thanks for the feedback.

[watsxgood]

correction.. i mention hollow tips but not in that sense and i said the word thug.. but only referring to thug passion "the drink"..

[Flawless]

Yo!! I was just listening to this beat since I'm going thru Kanye Beats. You need to work on the delivery and emotion tho. Other than that the lyrics are solid

[Inept]

I think his delivery was fine through most of it. And as far as more emotion, I think the word you're looking for is charisma/presence?

[Flawless]

Yuup. Steve said it best.

[watsxgood]

i'm trying to figure how i could've added more emotion.. i gotta sit down and really try to figure that shit out.. it could have to do with the fact that i did that shit in two takes.

[QuincentDePalma]

I think the delivery is on point. Don't really think it needs more emotion. Lyrics are tight. I'd give it a 8/10.