Haunting Dreams..

[$poke!]

Haunting Dreams..

[C^Mil]

You know im always here to crit ya stuff $poke, but you gotta return the favor. Shit even the ghost flawless appeared to drop a mixtape. Would love you opinions there, as well as my rough draft of a new track:

Flawless-I Miss H.E.R. Mixtape:
http://hiphopgame.ihiphop.com/forums...ad.php?t=79012

ROyalty (tentative title):
http://hiphopgame.ihiphop.com/forums...ad.php?t=78989

Now as for the song in question, i like the story-telling aspect of it, it's been too long since i heard a good one. The chorus fucks me up, kinda like im hearing it in the midst of a acid trip lol..a solid 3/5 track imo..and you went out like the guys in pelham 123 lol

[Stack_Bundles]

Mil for Mod.

[C^Mil]

Mil for Mod.

exactly what i was thiknin, i could take over for big homey inept

[$poke!]

exactly what i was thiknin, i could take over for big homo inept

2nd that......I gotchu dawg...

[MetaMorph]

It's all ok with this track, excluding the hook. Too many filters on it... otherwise is nice man

[¶-7-¶]

gggggeaeeaah!! i see u ma nig damn ..yea u do sound like ur own shit now man, thats how it should be done, so when niggaz hear ur voice, they connect straight away.. thats the hidden x factor that all respected artists have, a distinct way of makin niggaz connect straight away! nice shit

[blackburn]

hook is way off beat, and then to top it off u put a fuckin whack ass fx on it.. fucks is wrong wid you? // i feel like the hook either makes or breaks the song, its the heart... production is pretty whack (minus the keys).. lyrically way too simple.. i liked the flow tho, it seemd natural

once you get somewhere, down that road you'll realize you only going to have one chance in this game, dont let it be too late.. aint no more room for 1 hit wonders and garbage rappers.. go hard or go home..

1 outta 5

just keepin it real..

[$poke!]

thanks for listenin' peeps...