I do this all day every day
Week 7 Jae Fingerz Vs Hot16
Rules
16 lines
3-0= KO
4-1= TKO
1st to 5 votes wins
No Free-posting until match is all voted up
Votes should be explained thoroughly
No Feeding
Vote Example
Multies:
Wordplay:
Punches:
Flow:
Personals:
Intro/Outro:
Drop Due Wednesday at 11:59 PM Eastern Time
aka complex symmetry
aka kidney
aka oral lepercy
aka ya mother
I do this all day every day
checkin in
My heart has left me on a road not suitable .
For a person to walk upon, feats unexcuseable .
See if i get through to you ,
With messages manuvered through ,
The pains and torments that leave a pool of you dilusional .
So he don’t have a heart attack, I gotta hold back on Joseph like failed grades //
But don’t he look like George Costanza, with a fitted cap and Chanel shades? //
You just an old nigga with no figures, an everyday stan //
He’s a bold one, but I fold son, while he files his 401 K plan //
Duke cars are rented, tries to live a dream but pretends it //Originally Posted by Jae Fingerz
And even had to capitalize “son” just to feel more authentic //
Dum bummy, you frail fam, thinks he touches drug money //
Tries to be as fly as “Quailman” but chases pussy like “Doug Funny” //
You only pocket paper wid ya folders, push grass wid lawn mowers //
You kouldnt be from "Kings-ton" even with a crown and 2000 pounds on ya shoulders //
Im like an overstaffed hospital, no patience (patients) to lose //
And if I had a face like you, shit I’d put other dudes in my avatar too //
Nobody likes you, you even get whipped by white dudes like Prancer //
My name spreads like the Swine Flu, you’d have a better chance battling Cancer
The game don’t need ya, bitchin like a bleedin urethra //
And “Jae” couldn’t get his “Fingerz” on “Respect” if they were stuck up “Aretha”
Last edited by hot16; 04-28-2009 at 06:52 PM.
My heart has left me on a road not suitable .
For a person to walk upon, feats unexcuseable .
See if i get through to you ,
With messages manuvered through ,
The pains and torments that leave a pool of you dilusional .
He think he fire, Send em to Jae
Calling yourself Hot, Even the Sun goes down by the end of the day
You got a win that shouldn't past as one at all
'Cause you won-one against some-one that hasn't won at all (thats a gimmie)
You wanna reference? I got one, how about quoting this
"You couldn't write a sweeter verse then me if you sugar coated it"
Theres nothing you can do to prove that you are better
You couldn't see a "W" if I put 2 of U together (double U)
Throwing punchlines, I'm coming out to brawl
You post 16 weaker then the Jazz do Pau Gasol
How you down to ball? I don't give his bitch-ass props
The closest you come to pussy was hugging your bitch-ass pops
The riff-raff stops here, Who ever said you were Hot?
Wednesday? The real "dead-lines" been whenever you drop
Guess I'm a little late, but How you even middleweight?
Drop his soft ass down so the "Judges" can close this pillow "case"
Multies: 16
Wordplay: 16
Punches: 16
Flow: 16
Personals: 16
Intro/Outro: 16
i think this was pretty simple 16 took everything
nice try though jae
Last edited by mikeb361; 04-28-2009 at 10:49 PM.
S.A.H. Ent Ya Dig!!!
Multies:
Wordplay: jae
Punches: jae
Flow: jae
Personals: six
Intro/Outro: jae
i thought jae murdered this, had a few chuckles in there....16 was coo...started off strong got a lil weak....
close battle but jae just had me laughin and sayin that most of his stuff coulda been worded better i do think its the best vs from him thus far
vote jae
Ayo money I dont need you Dick Vitale'n this shit
kallin shit play by play aight. jumbles shit up.
Save ya shit fa after. word.
My heart has left me on a road not suitable .
For a person to walk upon, feats unexcuseable .
See if i get through to you ,
With messages manuvered through ,
The pains and torments that leave a pool of you dilusional .
good advice main...it makes u look low jae
ya'll right... deleted
multies:tie...neither had many
wordplay:Jae
punches:tie
personal:16
flow:Jae
outro/intro:tie...i liked Jae's intro better...and 16's outro...
this was a nice close battle...my categories show just how close i thought it was...though Jae has more cat's won...the cat's he won doesnt have much influence on my decision of the winner...personal and punches mean a big deal to my votes...both verses were entertaining...keep at it!!
my vote goes to 16
Vegas EntertainmentEdge- da battler
Kaunshis- da lyricist
Pick Ya Poison
lol 16 gets every cat. in this, dont even need a rubric.. watch jae would prob say "hate vote" LMFAO naah man, im realler than ur existence son ...but look at jae's verse, shit would have been good if it was mid 90s... all them punches were OOOLLLLD and generic ...sweet -sugar coated???, soft - pillow case???, put two Us together??? naah.. 16 ripped this nigga
..Blessed is he who shepherds the weak through the valley of darkness, for he is the finder of lost children. I will strike down upon thee with great vengeance those who attempt to destroy my brothers. And you will know my name is the Lord when I lay my vengeance upon you.Jules-S.L. Jackson-Ezekiel 25:17-GOD^WORD^
this shit was actually a goof\d battle, will vote soon.
aka complex symmetry
aka kidney
aka oral lepercy
aka ya mother
intro/outro: hot16 - jaes shit just wasn't that crucial. But hot 16's outro was pretty comical
flow/multi:jae Jae's flow was a little bit more on point and he had a few multies.
punches: hot 16- he had a lot of well developed punches that actually had the punch effect. Jaes were kinda simple and really didn't have that crucial punch feel to them. Kinda like light taps.
Personals: hot 16- He just got a lot more personal at jae...and his overal drop was more vicious and direct.
wordplay: jae- jae had more wordplay but none of it was really that strong and didn't help his punches out too much.
final vote: hot 16
hot 16 just had the better more crucial battle verse. Jae barely even went in at all
stop crying dro!--
And I am dat nigga! --
king 07 and beyond--
N.I.G.G.A never ignorant getting goals accomplished
Only G-d can judge me
Jae Fingerz verse was ass and had played shit to da death, he musta been writing punches from his childhood, nigga 27 with old ass shit lmaoo.
But hot16 took this one easily, his verse wasnt that great neither but he tried more
vote-hot16
Record:
71-11
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