Week 7 Ras Vs E.R

[ShadowBoxing89]

Rules

16 lines
3-0= KO
4-1= TKO
1st to 5 votes wins
No Free-posting until match is all voted up
Votes should be explained thoroughly
No Feeding

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Personals:
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Drop Due Wednesday at 11:59 PM Eastern Time

[RAS.]

Finally me and you battling E.R. ready to get that ass kicked

[e.r.]

ya im ready.. ..keyin

this fool aint drop shit EVER..why am i fuckin wit Ras?
mannn...Eddie even ghostwrited for ya on Illesty..and u still fuckin lost
you aint got nothing to offer..so why are you bluffin?
on illesty signed out..signed up for this league n still amounts to nothing
im high so i toke..your bars are never in quotes
reading ur shit..i have a harder time finding something u wrote
u just a loser everywhere..no matter wat site u been on
this HAS to be the only site you have ever been predicted to win on
i spend 2 minutes..so dont step in the ring w/out boxing
you took a whole week of back and forth in eddies PM box kid
everyone over on Illesty curious how u got a win queer
biter over there..looks like u bit more off then u could chew here
ready to get my ass kicked? quit the rhyming out
ya you got a locked up win..unless Eddie ends up signing out
well i got 1 bar left..i already went an dissed him
this final uppercut got you so fly..your in different solar systems

[RAS.]

http://www.illesty.net/board/showpos...74&postcount=3

groovy like the 60's, hot like a sauna, leave ya silent like a mime kid
and your verse been containing more PLAYED shit than my last line did

Wow another white guy impersonating blacks,I wonder some times
That maybe you r just keeping it Real,and recycling ya bullshit lines
I'll put u the (Emergency Room),in full body cast w/ a black eye's and swelled lips
Damn I mean E.R^^<you know the bitch w/ mediocre concepts and bullshit flips
Bitch I'm in the game like EA,while your sitting on the sidelines hater
Hell your poor ass is used to the bench..usually sleeping under old newspaper
Where's the competition,You r gradually getting worse
You wouldn't Develop skills even if you took a pictures me K.O'in ya Verse
I'm pissed because I lost,when I said would kill it
But if one bad verse has me feeling a little blue then you must be the smurf village
Where the creativity homie,Damn wackness plagues you
I guess when the good punches hit your head they land in ya stomach and face too
Damn you're dope,the best I seen,my Idol,I should look up to u
Ok now you know what it feels like getting props, being humiliated,and lied too
Dude keep getting his ass whip everywhere HHG and Illesty.net
Shit ya name should be volleyball..the way you get served all over the net


K.O....... Neeeext

[hot16]

Its simple enough RAS got this one. But terrible battle.
With all those Illesty personals, might as well take
ya battles there fam.

Dude keep getting his whip everywhere HHG and Illesty.net
Shit ya name should be volleyball..the way you get served all over the net


Liked this one. the word play sucked but the punch was there and
the meaning was plain enough to see so i give it to duke.

Don't know if the last 2 bars on RAS shit was feeding,
but regardless he still went in harder in every cat.

Vote- RAS

[HHP]

aight

intro/outro: RAS- both of you had some pretty ineffective shit. Like the serve over the net shit was killer played. But don't really get the illesty personals seeing how i've never been on that site. And er's closer does do it for me. I liked RAS's keeping it real line.

flow/multi- tie

punches: RAS- RAS slightly had stronger and more effective punches than er. But nobodys was that great.

personals: ER- ER tried to attack him a lot more personally. But may have overused the illesty concept and all the illesty personals.

Wordplay: tie- nobody impressed me over the other person in this battle.

FInal vote RAS

I think ER's verse would have been better had he of dropped it being on illesty. But it was kinda ineffective since it concentrated on illesty and this is hhg and nobody really knows what he is talking about. There seemed to be a lot of inside jokes.

[Flawless]

E.R:

this fool aint drop shit EVER..why am i fuckin wit Ras?
mannn...Eddie even ghostwrited for ya on Illesty..and u still fuckin lost
^ehhh, just cus its a personal doesnt mean its good, plus idk if its true

you aint got nothing to offer..so why are you bluffin?
on illesty signed out..signed up for this league n still amounts to nothing
^wack

im high so i toke..your bars are never in quotes
reading ur shit..i have a harder time finding something u wrote
^weak, poor wording

u just a loser everywhere..no matter wat site u been on
this HAS to be the only site you have ever been predicted to win on
^lol kinda ehh but made me laugh

i spend 2 minutes..so dont step in the ring w/out boxing
you took a whole week of back and forth in eddies PM box kid
^wouldnt know what thats about so wack

everyone over on Illesty curious how u got a win queer
biter over there..looks like u bit more off then u could chew here
^stop with the illesty references nigga lol

ready to get my ass kicked? quit the rhyming out
ya you got a locked up win..unless Eddie ends up signing out
^also stop with the eddie references, nigga looking like J's verse

well i got 1 bar left..i already went an dissed him
this final uppercut got you so fly..your in different solar systems
^uh, no

RAS:

Wow another white guy impersonating blacks,I wonder some times
That maybe you r just keeping it Real,and recycling ya bullshit lines
^hahaha this was ok

I'll put u the (Emergency Room),in full body cast w/ a black eye's and swelled lips
Damn I mean E.R^^<you know the bitch w/ mediocre concepts and bullshit flips
^ehh wording fucked it up

Bitch I'm in the game like EA,while your sitting on the sidelines hater
Hell your poor ass is used to the bench..usually sleeping under old newspaper
^didnt really hit

Where's the competition,You r gradually getting worse
You wouldn't Develop skills even if you took a pictures me K.O'in ya Verse
^worded horribly, knew where u were going tho, woulda been good

I'm pissed because I lost,when I said would kill it
But if one bad verse has me feeling a little blue then you must be the smurf village
^naw

Where the creativity homie,Damn wackness plagues you
I guess when the good punches hit your head they land in ya stomach and face too
^lol seen this but it made me laugh so fuck it

Damn you're dope,the best I seen,my Idol,I should look up to u
Ok now you know what it feels like getting props, being humiliated,and lied too
^damn lol

Dude keep getting his ass whip everywhere HHG and Illesty.net
Shit ya name should be volleyball..the way you get served all over the net
^good closing

Vote- RAS, E.R. got shitted on

[RAS.]

Yay A K.O. Good Battle E.R. Mods you know what to Do

[J. Quality II]

Multies: none
Wordplay:none
Punches:ras
Flow:tie
Personals:ras
Intro/Outro:ras

vote ras

[e.r.]

ya i have seen several of ras's lines used elsewhere. and consider this my sign out. he biting over here too but i dont give a shit cause this isnt my home site peace./

[Flawless]

oh word? expose the nigga then sons, niggas got home sites? lmaoo wats that haha