Jae Fingerz (1-0) Vs 7 (2-3) (7 wins via ko)

[ShadowBoxing89]

Rules

8 bars
3-0= KO
4-1= TKO
1st to 5 votes wins
No Free-posting until match is all voted up
Votes should be explained thoroughly
No Feeding

Vote Example

Multies:
Wordplay:
Punches:
Flow:
Personals:
Intro/Outro:


Drop Due Wednesday at 11:59 PM Eastern Time

[Jae Fingerz]

Walks in cocky as FUCK! from the week before.

Don't under-estimate an over-acheiver

[¶-7-¶]

walks in and punch him up before the match

<---fingers

[Jae Fingerz]

*dusts off the mic*

"Ahhum, Is this thing on? Good"
"Have ya'll seen this dudes drops?"
*Spits in 7's face*
"Aiight, I'm ready"


...& Ya'll thought I was bad with the flow?
Only time he's dropped "Quality" was three battles ago
...I won 1, Your 2 & 3 thus 4(far)
Out of 5, & for 6? Sevens ate(8) once more!
...9 out of 10 will say I served this brother
A play on words - but "murdered by NUMBERS!"
Ya'll playing with a flame, so don't provoke me to flare
'Cause all I do is "put out fire" like I'm Smokey the Bear
Last week? Thats me kidding around
Need help moving up a weight class? Shit, I'll give you a pound
You won't get a vote this week, Seven will flop
The only one with their "hand up" for Sevens a clock! (think about it)
...Even though your flow games a big mess
You still get "credit" with a "low rate of interest"
Yous a bitch!, Add em to these dames mingling
Trying to get "Fingerz in a ring" I remain "single in!"

[¶-7-¶]

looks like ur hopes up but i squash desires, this cat is brushing with tigers..
and im the match in this battle.. we know Fingers mama warned him not to be touchin fires...
shits biased, n ur from real's crew so hey badabing, im expectin the 1st vote by him..
and if we put both yall lines together, we could save the earth the way yall recycle them...
listen fam, u best quit the gun talk, shits old and dysentery is the only way u spray shit..
look how he came in the thread all cocky, swingin, so real could help him sway this...
u stray bitch! u stay dicksuckin dude but i guess u must kick it like u should..
and have him sittin like "ohhh yeaaah, that was Finger lickin good"...
im murkin u dude! fuck votes, in hhg, im a GIANT! stompin on this damn elf..
and when 7 pounds, u can forget about 9/11, i leave shit lookin like '9/12'...
so 1 urself! or u can pick up the 'rocks' and throw them with all ur strength n might..
but im above u, dropping bombs whilst u shook n still thinkin its a 'palestinian fight'...
u weak bitch, u shake in fright and barely got past the mike b kid..
give him a can of whoop ass but Fingers aint strong enuff to unscrew the lid...
i abuse him still, whip him with skill, <<oh look how he got sprung longin to cop a feel..
but 7 dont play that, as we've got 2 separate definitions of "keep in real"...

[HHP]

intro/outro: jae- I actually wasn't feeling your intro so much 7. jaes was a bit clever and 7's outro would have worked better if jae was in reals crew or if it was directed at real.

multie/flow- tie- i thought both of you could have stepped it up in this category. Not horrible though, just nobody took either multies or flow

punches: 7- jae had some clever punches that were somewhat effective. 7 just had the better ones with the stronger setups and more well constructed punches. Personally, I had the smokey the bear line .I thought it was mad corny lol

personals: 7- I don't think jae fingerz is in reals crew however i did notice that he did dick ride the dude which makes 7's personals even more crucial. Being that there is truth to them . jae had some clever ones but they just weren't hard hitting or as effective as 7's.i really liked that recycle line from 7

wordplay: jae fingerz- this seems to be where jae concentrated at mainly. He had some decent and clever word play such as the number thing at the beginning of his drop....and edges out this cat imo.

final vote: 7

Although jae fingerz had some clever shit and had the better wordplay. 7 had the better battle drop by taking the personals and punches category in my opinion. Not a bad battle

[Real.]

...& Ya'll thought I was bad with the flow?
Only time he's dropped "Quality" was three battles ago
-Cool personal, but the concept is played

...I won 1, Your 2 & 3 thus 4(far)
Out of 5, & for 6? Sevens ate(8) once more!
-Wordplay is aite

...9 out of 10 will say I served this brother
A play on words - but "murdered by NUMBERS!"
-Nice way to finish this lil scheme off

Ya'll playing with a flame, so don't provoke me to flare
'Cause all I do is "put out fire" like I'm Smokey the Bear
-HELL NO

Last week? Thats me kidding around
Need help moving up a weight class? Shit, I'll give you a pound
-Decent, aite flip

You won't get a vote this week, Seven will flop
The only one with their "hand up" for Sevens a clock! (think about it)
-Actually a 7 on a clock is point downward if thats what you're tryna incorporate, then aite. But if not then BOOOOO!

...Even though your flow games a big mess
You still get "credit" with a "low rate of interest"
-meh

Yous a bitch!, Add em to these dames mingling
Trying to get "Fingerz in a ring" I remain "single in!"
-it would be dope if it was an actual punch, but this is just biggin' up yaself

vs.

looks like ur hopes up but i squash desires, this cat is brushing with tigers..
and im the match in this battle.. we know Fingers mama warned him not to be touchin fires...
-Played Concept

shits biased, n ur from real's crew so hey badabing, im expectin the 1st vote by him..
and if we put both yall lines together, we could save the earth the way yall recycle them...
-This personal counts as half for the simple fact that its not true. Jae's not in my crew, but the second part was aite, although that was played out in the Lounge

listen fam, u best quit the gun talk, shits old and dysentery is the only way u spray shit..
look how he came in the thread all cocky, swingin, so real could help him sway this...
-LOL, at the fact that you have yet to through a punch at him

u stray bitch! u stay dicksuckin dude but i guess u must kick it like u should..
and have him sittin like "ohhh yeaaah, that was Finger lickin good"...
-LMAO, that was funny, but it could've been wittier

im murkin u dude! fuck votes, in hhg, im a GIANT! stompin on this damn elf..
and when 7 pounds, u can forget about 9/11, i leave shit lookin like '9/12'...
-Nah, this was used in '01 too lol

so 1 urself! or u can pick up the 'rocks' and throw them with all ur strength n might..
but im above u, dropping bombs whilst u shook n still thinkin its a 'palestinian fight'...
-decent concept, but could've been used better

u weak bitch, u shake in fright and barely got past the mike b kid..
give him a can of whoop ass but Fingers aint strong enuff to unscrew the lid...
-I liked this one, good personal and punch

i abuse him still, whip him with skill, <<oh look how he got sprung longin to cop a feel..
but 7 dont play that, as we've got 2 separate definitions of "keep in real"...
-Worded horribly, but I see where you were going with this

Jae Fingerz
...9 out of 10 will say I served this brother
A play on words - but "murdered by NUMBERS!"

vs.

7
u weak bitch, u shake in fright and barely got past the mike b kid..
give him a can of whoop ass but Fingers aint strong enuff to unscrew the lid...

This was a close battle, both came better than I expected. It could go either way. Jae came out with the better opener even though it was played. Both followed up pretty bad, but not to the point where I couldn't keep reading. 7 got the personals, Jae BARELY got the nameplay. Punches were about equal, but I'm goin with 7's bitch ass on this one, only because he had more of a battle verse than Jae. Jae did come with a few witty lines, I'ma stop shittin' on you in my predictions and reviews now. . . but 7 got it

Vote - 7

[Jae Fingerz]

actually Real, if its 7:00 one hand is on the 7 the other is up on 12... learn read a clock

[Real.]

Ooooo. . . lol I'm just think'n the hand pointed to the 7. . . the f*ck ever lol, we got digital clocks round here bruh. plus clock lines were used in the Mid 90's... I told you, you had some witty shit though, I thought you were gonna drop complete garbage lol

[J. Quality II]

true ^ but ur wording was terrible on that line

if it would of said something like "the only ones with a big hand up for 7s o clock....not "7s a clock"

so due to the wording bein not great we didnt get it we thought u meant the lil hand on the 7







shits biased, n ur from real's crew so hey badabing, im expectin the 1st vote by him..
and if we put both yall lines together, we could save the earth the way yall recycle them...




u weak bitch, u shake in fright and barely got past the mike b kid..
give him a can of whoop ass but Fingers aint strong enuff to unscrew the lid...


vs

...& Ya'll thought I was bad with the flow?
Only time he's dropped "Quality" was three battles ago

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do people not read all the battles here...u jus flipped reals line last week man...

vote 7


he came wit the comedy on this one....the quoted line above was the best of the battle....had a lot of LOLs n there too....


Jae scheme is fit for audio...i think he would be great at that


and 7 shorten ya bars there a bit stretched g