Sickvick (1-1) Vs hot16 (1-3) (sickvick wins via tko)

[ShadowBoxing89]

Rules

8 bars
3-0= KO
4-1= TKO
1st to 5 votes wins
No Free-posting until match is all voted up
Votes should be explained thoroughly
No Feeding

Vote Example

Multies:
Wordplay:
Punches:
Flow:
Personals:
Intro/Outro:


Drop Due Wednesday at 11:59 PM Eastern Time

[hot16]

checkin in

[SickScript]

mic check 1,2 1,2

[hot16]

This will be a slick trip I’ll punk him on the bitch tip //
Dude is a quick miss, I’ll have his own dogs sick vick //
So he thinks he kicks sick, that his rhymes are that ill shit//
Title in ya user name is the only line that was a sick script//
Bullets the size of Apples B, to ya mouth to shut ya fat trap //
Spice his bitch Ribs like Chilli, find his ass bitching Outback //
Black, don’t fear being fearless, or fear being afraid //
Kuz I’m revered as the feared one the fearless fear each day //
My bars spread like SARS, so I don’t spit, now my flow hurls //
I think of Vegas Entertainment, nothing but quick tricks and showgirls //
And you already sick, and battling me is shittin on ya health //
Only way you get a bitch panties wet is by pissin on yaself //

REQUEST!!!

Can somebody hook me up wit that K-I-S-S-I-N-G instrumental of the Nas track off I Am... I cant find that joint anywhere, good looks to whoever can hook it up, will rep.

Fag even said he wanted the KISSING beat, said he’d rep the sender //
Homo contender, on a love track, wants to rep someone of the same gender? //
He’s a shook clown, so get ready for that trick stick jook now //
Wannabe Vick, get booked now, and be the reason ya dogs get put down

[SickScript]

AIGHT BITCHES, LEMME GET THAT FLOW GOIN...


Fuck that ‘Lyrical Anomaly’ crap, you harmless wit rap//
My bars state the facts, Anomaly? You normally wack//

You bitchin and shit, frontin like what you scriptin is sick//
But you like jail time for 1 week, ya "Sentence" aint shit//

The kid is equipped wit flows that go wild regardless//
You couldn’t get a hot16 on some pedaphile charges//

Respekting input.

Keep it kummin

And you don’t hold guns, I grip up and bust em away//
Your typing style’s the only time you touchin a K//

The fact that you think you descent have me wild confused//
Ima man, you beat KidHustle on some child abuse//

Im assuming this is a battle thread korrekt?
So, in battles how can adlibs be present?
You'd need to rekord then dub the verse to have lib's.

I flow mad sick, classic, verse put you in a casket//
This faggot aint got a descent bar and worried about adlibs//

Ya style is harmless, I’m an artist, my bars sick//
Ya sig gay, like Kanye I'll leave you Heartless//

But ya boy shines on the block when I rhyme in the spot//
16 is like Spring weather, just tryna be hot//


WE IN HERE EAST COAST!!!

[¶-7-¶]

Multies: tie.. both yall had some good ones, tho most were on that "icky sick script, slick switch" shit lol
Wordplay: script.. not that outstanding tho, the 'sentence' was one of it, tho jail/sentence lines are overplayed
Punches: script ...16 had some decent ones as well but script edged it
Flow: 16
Personals: script ...the fuck 16? u had like none!!! fuck this cript nigga has a basket full of personals, so u get points deducted for that dammit
Intro/Outro: aint feelin any but scripts had me rollin lmao

pretty decent battle and i like 16's style, what fucked him up was a little too much self hype and kinda led him astray from his opponent.. sick went in straite up and as my rubric says, vote to script

[SickScript]

haha ok, 1-0 I'm up, keepn on votin'.

[ShadowBoxing89]

will be back to vote

[Jae Fingerz]

Was A decent battle

Flow/Multies: Yea, You both had it on this. Tie
Wordplay: SickScript (16 was aiight too, Tried too hard with that whole restruant chain line & at the end didn't really make sense)
Personals: Script (16 threw some but Sick threw some the whole way through)
Intro: Script
Outro: Hot16
Punches: Script (16 had a few but were more like jabs nothing hard hitting)

Faves

"He’s a shook clown, so get ready for that trick stick jook now //
Wannabe Vick, get booked now, and be the reason ya dogs get put down" -Hot16

Vs.

"You bitchin and shit, frontin like what you scriptin is sick//
But you like jail time for 1 week, ya "Sentence" aint shit" - SickScript


Vote: SickScript

Not too bad but deff not the worst

[Real.]

Fag even said he wanted the KISSING beat, said he’d rep the sender //
Homo contender, on a love track, wants to rep someone of the same gender? //

vs.

None.

Wasn't much to pick out of either verses. 16 came with some forced lines and a lot his personals weren't witty enough. Also had that played Vegas Ent line. Script came just as soft, didn't have any lines that caught my eye. Only line that made me pause was the hot16 line then I realized its been used countless amounts of times against him. Script was on an elementary type rhyme scheme, while 16 tried to throw some multi's in there & normally I don't give a damn about Multi's but thats what this battle basically came down to. That & who had more qutables and I like how 16 incorporated the personal in there. Kinda witty, could've been worded better but it hit.

Vote - hot16

[$poke!]

Multies:
Wordplay: Even..bout even both was tryn to flip shit
Punches: SV..both i say nice in this dept. but sick threw harder
Flow: SV..again both was readable..but feel vics was more on point.
Personals: SV
Intro/Outro:..SV/Even


Pretty good shit..both were pretty nice..Hot did his thing I just think
Sick dropped some extra every day activities and put that effort in his verse this week.

One of the nicest Ive seen from him..

16's verses was a W against someone else..

vote SS

good shit ya'l...
A.I.M high

[HHP]

intro/outro: sick- I liked Sicks intro and outro better than hot 16s...The dogs and mike vick references have been played out a lot even tho vick used to be in sicks name. but hot 16 didn't do a bad job reusing the concepts.

flow/multie: hot16- I think hot 16 had the better multies and slightly better overall flow in his drop then did sick. But sicks was also on point.

personals: tie- I wasn't really feeling either of your personals this battle. Nothing really did it for me in this cat. Either they were played or just had no effect. but some decent attempts.

punches: sick- I wasn't really feeling punches either so much in this battle. Nothing fresh or really hard hitting. But overall, Sicks punches outweighed hot 16's.

wordplay: sick they both tried to flip shit but I think vicks came out slightly better which also made his punches slightly better.

final vote sick:

I am disappointed by this battle. Sick gets my vote but i have seen him drop so much better. hot16 had the better flow and multies but everything else sick edged him out in.