not too late to retire, real
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Last edited by ShadowBoxing89; 04-19-2009 at 08:16 PM.
not too late to retire, real
stop crying dro!--
And I am dat nigga! --
king 07 and beyond--
N.I.G.G.A never ignorant getting goals accomplished
Only G-d can judge me
Shut up bitch...
Leaders of the New School
"When my time on Earth is gone, and my activities here are passed, I want they bury me upside down, and my critics can kiss my ass!"
-Bob Knight
so.rell
or what ever name dis nigga goes by now
real
hahahaha dis is a massacre
your resume is a bore but my “spit game” shines like pearl
but not rell, cuz if it did he wouldn't have to resort to writing lame 16's for his girl
u aint a mack, n rap battling aint for u , I know its hard to swallow the facts
but maybe u should make like your name, rell, and stick to those r&b tracks
your better off swallowing tacks than tryna win imaginary trophy's and plaques
I pity dis kat, he could copy my last drop n still wouldnt be where I am lyrically at (catch up nigga)
your not vicious wit raps, the p stands for pussy on dis pussy's black hat
face it hes wack, he couldn't “lockdown” HHG if he had the new vb mod hack.
See me, im dat..nigga, ur known as “ I don't wanna join the same crew as that nigga”
its gunna take a lot more than bench presses and supplements n dis league to get bigger
look nigga., were tired of your style, played punch after a self hype filler
plus your “personals” wouldn't get acknowledgment if u were the craiglists killer
you in the limelight u know you only get one week of fame right?
Cuz ima drop your ass quicker than indiana did to your role model Bob knight
You can be replaced b, shoulda signed out why would u wanna face me?
You under h-p, your log in names the only “title” you'll ever hold on h-h-g
ur a disgrace b, how did u become #2 with so many light weight tendencies?
My shits dope, u couldnt “drop crack” if u went to rehab wit chemical dependencies
never will u finish me, dis your second name how come niggaz never knew u?
but every drop were like
didnt u “busta rhymes” before, cuz they as original as the “leaders of the new school”
ftw
stop crying dro!--
And I am dat nigga! --
king 07 and beyond--
N.I.G.G.A never ignorant getting goals accomplished
Only G-d can judge me
Your Whack Ass Drops...
Let's get this straight, you're a mod & a vet, makes me wonder dog...
How you can be all that plus #1 in the league & still be the Underdog
You're slow! So when it comes to fightin' you, no one fears
...If he's Light On His Feet, he's only triggerin' his LA Gears
I might have played bars, but you're the one with dumb lines
they're Worded so Poor - I saw all your verses on Bum Signs
I copped 3 KO wins. You barely made your way to the beltOriginally Posted by HHP
I TKO'd Bigdog, you edged him out. What does that say bout yourself?
You bragged about Puttin' Down your girl, but thats less than the truth
You said you're Hittin' It Every Night - She said it was Domestic Abuse
...If you are f*ckin' anybody, you gotta keep it silent
always gettin Shut Down 'cause HP's known to catch a Virus
The HipHop Police is baffled. The robbery of Votes he can't believe
He's still trying to figure out why he has yet to have any Leads
So you call yourself the champ, but no one else co-signed it
Consider this another 'Ship Jacked, and this verse a Samoli Pirate
So farewell homeboy, now I'm packin' and attemptin' to go
I know I'll be truely Missed... by those punches you're attemptin' to throw
You'll forever work for this site, you can't say no to that
His career is Hangin' by a Thread, waitin' to Close a Match
Getoffmydick...
Leaders of the New School
"When my time on Earth is gone, and my activities here are passed, I want they bury me upside down, and my critics can kiss my ass!"
-Bob Knight
HHP
your resume is a bore but my “spit game” shines like pearl
but not rell, cuz if it did he wouldn't have to resort to writing lame 16's for his girl
concept was cool.but the deliver wasnt hard hitting
u aint a mack, n rap battling aint for u , I know its hard to swallow the facts
but maybe u should make like your name, rell, and stick to those r&b tracks
concept cool again...but once again the deliver of the punch was not like "ohhh!"
your better off swallowing tacks than tryna win imaginary trophy's and plaques
I pity dis kat, he could copy my last drop n still wouldnt be where I am lyrically at (catch up nigga)
played
your not vicious wit raps, the p stands for pussy on dis pussy's black hat
face it hes wack, he couldn't “lockdown” HHG if he had the new vb mod hack.
no wasnt a great concept nor anything
See me, im dat..nigga, ur known as “ I don't wanna join the same crew as that nigga”
its gunna take a lot more than bench presses and supplements n dis league to get bigger
the first line was filler filler filler...like u needed somthing to rhyme wit the pun and u end up just sayn that but the punch was nice..although its just a flipped concept from my last week verse
look nigga., were tired of your style, played punch after a self hype filler
plus your “personals” wouldn't get acknowledgment if u were the craiglists killer
lol ok
you in the limelight u know you only get one week of fame right?
Cuz ima drop your ass quicker than indiana did to your role model Bob knight
the wording was terrible in this one fame right and bob knight just threw off the whole flow, wasnt feelin the pun
You can be replaced b, shoulda signed out why would u wanna face me?
You under h-p, your log in names the only “title” you'll ever hold on h-h-g
for those who wont get this he mean his alias aka title of his name...this was ok
ur a disgrace b, how did u become #2 with so many light weight tendencies?
My shits dope, u couldnt “drop crack” if u went to rehab wit chemical dependencies
wording is horrible of a played concept
never will u finish me, dis your second name how come niggaz never knew u?
but every drop were like
didnt u “busta rhymes” before, cuz they as original as the “leaders of the new school”
not feelin the closer
nothin in hhps verse was eye opening in my aspect, the wording was terrible and no fresh punches in the whole verse
Real
Let's get this straight, you're a mod & a vet, makes me wonder dog...
How you can be all that plus #1 in the league & still be the Underdog
nice, but the wording is terrible
You're slow! So when it comes to fightin' you, no one fears
...If he's Light On His Feet, he's only triggerin' his LA Gears
omg La Gears were in in the ninetys...just like this concept n pun
I might have played bars, but you're the one with dumb lines
they're Worded so Poor - I saw all your verses on Bum Signs
ok ok not great but ok
I copped 3 KO wins. You barely made your way to the belt
I TKO'd Bigdog, you edged him out. What does that say bout yourself?
good personal but the wording is bad...i could of seen a harder deliver if it was like
your heads like a peanut// <filler people
i tko'd bigdog you edged it...so do that math and tell me the difference between us
You bragged about Puttin' Down your girl, but thats less than the truth
You said you're Hittin' It Every Night - She said it was Domestic Abuse
played concept bout assault n battery, domestic violence, and it looks like ur flippin the "hit a girl from the back car insurance" line from our battle
...If you are f*ckin' anybody, you gotta keep it silent
always gettin Shut Down 'cause HP's known to catch a Virus
ok this didnt make sense HP is getting shutdown cuz he catches viruses? wouldnt you mean somthin like HP is always shutdown cuz he gives viruses?....
The HipHop Police is baffled. The robbery of Votes he can't believe
He's still trying to figure out why he has yet to have any Leads
**crickets*
So you call yourself the champ, but no one else co-signed it
Consider this another 'Ship Jacked, and this verse a Samoli Pirate
nice! ding!
So farewell homeboy, now I'm packin' and attemptin' to go
I know I'll be truely Missed... by those punches you're attemptin' to throw
coo coo
You'll forever work for this site, you can't say no to that
His career is Hangin' by a Thread, waitin' to Close a Match
nah
Overall I felt this was a dissapointing Champ match.
Real was ok had one nice line while HHP had none...HHP multis were there more then Reals but they seemed forced!
Vote: Real
P.S. Is it just me or does a lot of people on this board have the same style with the spaces between bars and constantly postin links after links in there verse
Last edited by J. Quality II; 04-21-2009 at 08:17 PM.
i started my vote, but you know the basketball games on right now, i'll get back at yall.
hshhashhhahhhahhaha @jquality. 0-1 im down upping for votes
its halftime shadow
stop crying dro!--
And I am dat nigga! --
king 07 and beyond--
N.I.G.G.A never ignorant getting goals accomplished
Only G-d can judge me
Better than his previous drops, but not as good as i'd like it to have been.Originally Posted by HHP
Not his best drop execution wise, but he was still creative.Originally Posted by Real
Punches-Real( more clever shit, hhp execution was off alot, he also had alot of played shit at the end of his verse)
Personals-HHP(he attacked em with all type of shit, none of which landed that hard)
wordplay-Real ( shit was more witty, hhp ish was played)
Overall- Real, I was very disappointed in this match, it was decent, I was expecting more though
Flow/Multies: Real (the multies were pretty even but Real edges out with the flow)
Wordplay: Real (He nabs this with the craft & creativity, HHP had concept but were sloppy)
Personals: Hard to call, Tie
Intro/Outro: Real (Intro was aiight, but I liked the outro more)
Punches: Real (More creativity, & smoothness with the punches. HHP were played out & all the set ups were looking set down)
Faves
"I might have played bars, but you're the one with dumb lines
they're Worded so Poor - I saw all your verses on Bum Signs" -Real
Vs.
"See me, im dat..nigga, ur known as “ I don't wanna join the same crew as that nigga/ its gunna take a lot more than bench presses and supplements n dis league to get bigger" -HHP
They both dropped alot better in previous battles. Didn't feel like a championship title fight what so ever. I was kinda disappointed with HHP, Dudes cocky for no reason. Its like your cock is hard & ain't no pussy around, You ain't doing nothing with it. You just aiight, you claiming your untouchable & I've seen about a handful of dudes here that could take you out. Real, You came alot harder in your last battles as well
as a battle, its was aaah but as a Champ match.... BOOO
Vote: Real