Battle League Week 5: Hot16 Vs KidHustle (Hot16 by KO)

[ShadowBoxing89]

Three-Way Rules

10 bars
3-0= KO
4-1= TKO
1st to 5 votes wins
No Free-posting until match is all voted up
Votes should be explained thoroughly
No Feeding

Post Editing

Can't edit your verse unless after the first vote if your the 2nd person that posted, 1st person can't edit after the 2nd person posted.

Vote Example

Multies:
Wordplay:
Punches:
Flow:
Personals:
Intro/Outro:

I don't want to catch people copying and pasting votes

Drop Due Wednesday at 11:59 PM Eastern Time

Also Remember Point system has changed

[hot16]

Sorry for the late check in... but has duke even showed face?

[kidhustle]

ok, wtf ?
I effin signed out
Anyway, ima jus drop cos im a chill dude

[hot16]

So it looks like Im goin international to bash this bashful clown //
In a town where missionaries fuck him, so lets see again if he's backin down //
Oxymoron in his name, when you ever seen this kid hustle? //
We karry big duffles, by the truck full, let's see you lift em with kid muscles //
In my past day with batched cakes I sold it all the fast way //
How you pass the rock in Africa, son you could'nt even catch A.I.D.S. //
And you'll need aid in the motherland, tribes won't even let him out //
So we tie tie him like rubberbands, pop him when we stretch him out //
Now he says he's an MC and writes rhymes, but thats hard to distinguish //
Kuz son was born in '91, rap died before he knew english //
Yet I heard how he flops, said he bakes but gets no cookies //
Hoes in ya town don't wear tops, so how is it you get no pussy //
Nobody to run to, he signed out and they punked duke //
Dont worry about saving the Hip Hop Game, who the fuck is gunna save you? //
But truthfully I owe you thanks, you became the end of the streak //
Kuz battlin dude is like a win overdue, I consider you as a bye week

[kidhustle]

This dude soft like toast, he'll get buttered up
N even if he was plumbin pipes n sewers, couldnt spit gutter stuff
What the fuck's up ? Ask ya self son
I kick in the door, bitch greeted me, "yay, 'well, cum'"/nø homo
Yea i aint makin sense, but i'll leave ya bent n bruised up
N i damage ya brain when i beat some sense in to ya
Ya rhymes is trash dude, you can never drop shit clean
Gettin ya pad burnt n refined the only way u spit a hot sixteen
Yea, i got bad 'set ups', im surely a corrupt file
N i'll bull doze this fuck out his house, im surely buck wild
Fuck now, he been fallin thru ranks, i need 2 Stop ripping up this dude
Stop fidgetin, kid u need 2 stop trippin on ur shoes
Its obvious ya rhymes rank low, at the bottom mayne
And yer sixteens fall too fast, not on par with me even from the top of a plane
Lets draw the curtains on dude, hand me a paper and pen
I nail the lid down wit the hammer, tell me what r the odds for this hater to win

[Real.]

Nobody to run to, he signed out and they punked duke //
Dont worry about saving the Hip Hop Game, who the fuck is gunna save you? //

vs.

None.

Wow. . . This was BS. . . wasn't worth the read. . . both ya'll need to come harder next week (no homo). . . 16 got this, BARELY. . . pretty boring battle mayne. . . step it up, I know ya'll are better than this. . .

Vote - hot16

[Jae Fingerz]

Flow/Multies: 16 (Kid needs to work on the multies more)
Wordplay: 16
Personals: 16 (I liked the Africa lines, which were also my fave punches)
Intro/Outro: Neither (ya'll should both try to come in & end with something thats gonna catch the voters eye in the begining, Come out swinging & at the end kick em when he's down)
Punches: 16 (you had good ideas & alot of concepts that were poorly put together, Same with Kid, the thought was there but didn't come out right)

My Faves

"Now he says he's an MC and writes rhymes, but thats hard to distinguish //
Kuz son was born in '91, rap died before he knew english" -Hot16

Vote: Hot16

Constructive Critizism:

Kidhustle: Work on concepts & creativity they'll complament your punches

Hot16: Work on you punch foundation & try to put it together more lyrically

[Flawless]

Nobody to run to, he signed out and they punked duke //
Dont worry about saving the Hip Hop Game, who the fuck is gunna save you? //
But truthfully I owe you thanks, you became the end of the streak //
Kuz battlin dude is like a win overdue, I consider you as a bye week

Now he says he's an MC and writes rhymes, but thats hard to distinguish //
Kuz son was born in '91, rap died before he knew english //


Aside from those bars of hot16 this battle was wack as fuck.

Vote-hot16

[ShadowBoxing89]

Nobody to run to, he signed out and they punked duke //
Dont worry about saving the Hip Hop Game, who the fuck is gunna save you? //

VS

Nothing

punches-hot16( I'm starting to think kid doesn't know how to deliver a punch)
flow-tie
personals-hot16( he ripped kid on this one, he gets it even though the African ish is kinda played)




Overall-Hot16
actually IMO, hot 16 came kinda nice, had some played shit int there, but I dig the swagger, so props. Kid had generic shit, didn't really throw a hard punch, stop trying to be complex, if you can't throw nice punches get disrespectful, insult them, talk about the mother.

[$poke!]

wrap.........