Battle League Week 2: Spoke vs. hot16 (Spoke wins via KO)

[Flawless]

16 bars
3 votes in a row = KO
Otherwise first to 5 votes wins
No Freeposting until match is all voted up
Votes should be explained thoroughly

Example

Multies:
Wordplay:
Punches:
Flow:
Personals:
Intro/Outro:

and a little brief statement of who you chose to vote for

Each battleler has 24-48 hrs to drop after both check in.

[hot16]

checkin in. who's goin first money?

[~K!dney-$h@t's~]

anyone can go first

[$poke!]

dont matter just within the time frame.

[hot16]

fuck it i'll go in

[hot16]

Rhyme scheme from hell, flow is diabolical //
Tell me if it's logical for all your "fans" to follow you //
See I throw bud in vapors, get high like sky scrapers //
You virgin lung smoker, you'd get high off my paper //
But Ima cut the narc talk, dont know how many Ricky's patrol //
So it's all about alphabets; a B who got G's to the O's //
Leave it exposed, and I hope God can cluth ya //
Before the 9 fuck ya and his young'ns come to touch ya //
But if you unprotected, like dicks without the rubber //
Then hollows leave you infected til you can't even rhyme; busta //
And for my last six bars I'll go and tell you his story //
About how my spoken word became golden to this shorty //
Studied my flow, rhymes, shit even wanted to be me //
I said" B, leave me, you aint near my level, believe me" //
Eyes open you can't see me, and son you havent since //
Next day, hot16 tatted on his eyelids, just so he could catch a glimpse

[$poke!]

Who said he got a hot 16, thats his name to camouflage the wackness..
And it ain't SG without a Gun, Camoflauged, so this heres target practice..

"Line"m up "16" deep and I'll blaze them all, got him "hot" cause now he see he loosin'..
Cause he couldn't "spark" a hot bar if his brain came from spain wit "fuses"..

"Who's this?"
some one "should of told him" spoke was no joke, and "he'll get tangled wit his tongue"..
Talkin dumb shit’ll get you hung trick, like I kicked the chair from under him..

This Hott 16, Imma bundle’m, trash this dude im tired of this junk..
And he couldn’t ride off with a win, if I threw victory in his trunk..

His flows are Minor league, Not hot but a sweet 16, just young and adolescent..
Ya name may spit flames, but ya spit games not manifesting..

So hit tha road jack, take your 14 post and return to the beyond..
You couldn’t be the focus behind hard bars, locked up like Akon..

16 rock bibs and apronz, no mics and stages, shows and venues..
Now that his flows been misued, get him some paper towels and tissues..

So Hot can wake up and take this “L” cause this heres not a dream..
Cause Imma pick the plot to bury you so its only right your Lot16

[HHP]

intro/outro: Spoken- I liked hot 16's outro...but overall spoke just had the better start & ending. Was put together a lot better and much more effective
flow/multis: spoken- 16's flow was kinda simple where spokens was a lil more sophisticated and flowed nicely
wordplay- tie
Punches: spoken- in my opinion the punches were kinda weak in my opinion. Nothing had me like "wow" or "damn" But spoken's punches still were better than hot 16's. They had more sting.
personals:tie- nobody took away this category

This battle was lacking in my opinion. Hot16 just really didn't attack his opponent and spoken lightly attacked him. But enough to get the victory

Final vote : spoken

[¶-7-¶]

Multies: n/a
Wordplay: 16
Punches: sg
Flow: 16
Personals: sg
Intro/Outro: sg/n/a

sg edged this... 16 had a bit too much of the self-hype lines

[Flawless]

Multies: Spoke-seen him try a couple altho both were lacking
Wordplay: tie
Punches: Spoke- that voctory in ya trunk line was nice
Flow: hot16
Personals:Spoke
Intro/Outro: both intros weak, to me hot16 took the outro

hot16:

And for my last six bars I'll go and tell you his story //
About how my spoken word became golden to this shorty //
Studied my flow, rhymes, shit even wanted to be me //
I said" B, leave me, you aint near my level, believe me" //
Eyes open you can't see me, and son you havent since //
Next day, hot16 tatted on his eyelids, just so he could catch a glimpse

^only part of the verse I liked, wasn't anough tho

SPoke:

"Line"m up "16" deep and I'll blaze them all, got him "hot" cause now he see he loosin'..
Cause he couldn't "spark" a hot bar if his brain came from spain wit "fuses"..
^worded better woulda made this punch nicer, dcent tho

This Hott 16, Imma bundle’m, trash this dude im tired of this junk..
And he couldn’t ride off with a win, if I threw victory in his trunk..
^easily ya best bars

His flows are Minor league, Not hot but a sweet 16, just young and adolescent..
Ya name may spit flames, but ya spit games not manifesting..
^liked this one as well

Overall battle was ehhh, cant really blame hot16 for not throwing any personals or anything but he coulda came better, spoke did just enough to beat him it seems, my vote goes to spoke tho

Vote-Spoke


SPoke wins via KO