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[Keynote]

i havent written in months, just thought id write a little.
appreciate any feedback whatsoever......



out of breath, thoughts run rampant, last place
fast pace-my world turns, caught standing.
choking; broken dreams puzzle my madness
passionate my pain, flirting close to death
purple lips twist the serpent; so certain
shame shows no shadow. third eye blind
forseeing darkness at high noon
cries boom like thunder on crash
inside a hostile mindstate, outnumbered
a signed fate, a confessional of fire.
goons guard braincells; insane hell
so beast, unleashed the hounds of frowns
gnawing my surface, worthless i pray
as screams of failure echo a lifetime
fallen stars heard thru deaf ears
my reality feuls galaxies on contact
dreamworlds are grapes of wrath
force fed food for thought
bled- the belly of the beast, a feast
of secrets, eaten alive im defined.
my appetite for greatness ageless
born pageless, broken stories torn
twisted truths confuse my views
bruised ego-lethal thoughts so evil
close to edges with suicidal pledges
salute agony; with a wartime mind
designed for peace; dismembered
surrendered, white flag i plea

[The Goods]

well that was cute.

[Keynote]

^question, did the Bar Exam 2 already drop?

[wordzspitz]

cool g for real

[The Goods]

^question, did the Bar Exam 2 already drop?

No, not yet.

[Keynote]

^damn u had me amped lol.

good look on the replies