You get props for a REAL TAKE on Sierra Leone! That's FAMLAND. Besides that all I see is nerdy raps. !@%#$%erl;gtejgojdknlflamlmaop Good luck with that
SEE I YEARN TO BE ACCEPTED BY A SOCIETY IF MINORITIES
THAT THINK SKATING BOARDING IS BORING/
BUT CARRIES A BOARD BECUASE THE FASHION IS SPAULDING/
CONSTANTLY BOUNCING /THATS REALLY ANNOYING
SEE I YARN TO BE ACCEPTED BY FEMALES/
CAUGHT UP BY MATERIALESTIC/TO LET EM KNOW I'M CLERK KENT
IN A METROPOLIS PHONE BOOTH/MEANING IM FLY (BITCHES)LOL
MY PERSONA IS I /AND I EXPOSE IT TO LITE
LIKE WHITE DIAMONDS IN THE HANDS OF LITTLE BLACK DIAMONDS/
IN SIERRA LEON/EVEN THO I KNOW THE STRUGGLE THEY ON/I WOULD HAVE TO THINK TWICE ABOUT PUTTING EM ON/STILL SHINING EVEN THO I KNO THAT ITS WRONG/IT'S THE IGNORANCE OR MY PIGMENT NAH / IT'S THE IGNORANCE FOR THESE BITCHES(NO DISRES[ECT LADIES)
SEEE I YEARN TO BE ACCEPTED AS THE ANIME WATCHER/
YUGI CARD COLLECTOR/
THE FINAL FANTASY PLAYA /AND YES MY CHARCTERS OR ON LEVEL 99 WITH THIER ULTIMATE WEAPONS/(THAT NIGGA IM HIM)
THE COMIC BOOK READER /
AND I PROBABLY BE ILLETIRATE ,IF IT WEREN'T FOR SPIDEY(SPIDERMAN)FOR YOU POSERS ,PUTTING THE HURT ON VENOM , OR THE XMEN SPANKING ONSLAUGHT IN ISSUE(DO IT REALLY MATTER NO )
MOST IMPORTANT WE YARN TO BE ACCEPTED BY OUR SELVES/
THATS WHY WE HIDE BEHIND BRAND NAMES,GOLD ROPES AND CARS/
MAYBE WE FEEL OUR NAMES OR WORTHLESS AND THE LITTLE LITE THAT SHINES WITH IN US DOSEN'T DRIVE US ENOUGH.
SO WE NEED A BENZ(SHIT GIVE ME A HOOPTY)
IM LIEING GIVE ME A BENZ /
SEE I YEARN TO BE ACCEPTED BY YOU'LL WHO THINK SKATING BOARDING IS BORING
FINAL FANTASY SNORING
ANIME AND YU GI OH IS APUALING/BUT MOST OF ALLI YEARN TO BE ACCEPTED BY ME
You get props for a REAL TAKE on Sierra Leone! That's FAMLAND. Besides that all I see is nerdy raps. !@%#$%erl;gtejgojdknlflamlmaop Good luck with that
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You should stop typing in caps, it makes people not want to read it.
Its also hard to tell when youre trying to rhyme, you need to work on your line structure.
Content wise, its pretty much a bunch of junk we already heard lupe talk about.
you kno what i dnt have anything to say ,behind you guys up here....im not a keystyle rapper ,so that will be the last post up here,you wanna hear some tracks check out my page ...much love to you all
you know i be on yo head in that 2 bar diss shit...but this shit here shits crazy if you wanna beat to it hit me up wit a private message...i can do somethin 4 ya real quick
im in a league of bosses...![]()
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where niggas push so much they hustle games ex-zah-sted...![]()
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Listen thisnis a poem not a rap,poems dnt have not distinct rhyme structure