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  1. 10-01-2007 #1
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    Default Ten Text Commandments (1-6)

    Listen,

    If you a student sitting at your desk at campus
    ...Or a grown man thinking of your next advancement…
    Whether you’re Vets or stand-ins, Kill or collectin’ handprints
    Your all welcome to the 10 text commandments

    Online there’s no copy-rights for your spitting
    So if you want hype for your writtens
    You gotta think sharp like a knife in the kitchen
    Which brings me to rule # 1 there’s no biting or clipping
    Whats clipping you say? It’s biting but in a different way
    It’s not writing it’s flipping a phrase-- after you heard a line
    When you like a punch use the idea and re-word the rhyme
    So get on your grind and follow the steps above
    Cause copy & paste rappers get NO respect or love
    it’s known as fact in rap there’s no holding back
    which brings me to rule# 2 make sure your flow is crack
    use multi syllable rhyming with lyrical timing
    if your looking to shine with each line this is critical priming
    so listen close and pay attention if you’re a noob out to grow
    if you use internal rhymes it will help to smooth out the flow
    internal rhymes are based off the multi NOT the rhyme scheme itself
    want your lines clean then stay on the rhyme scene cos time seems to help
    In text you can’t use the tounge so the 3rd rules of thumb
    Is to throw punches that’ll leave his face bruised and numb
    Get some dirt on him, find out what site dude is from
    “Oh, that’s son from XXL who was the weakest cat in a crew of bums”
    Get some ammo and you can cause fatalities with ease
    You’ll always be a lock to win ‘cos originalities the key
    Jot down your ideas and write down your targets in order
    so if you get writers-block you’ll have enuff crack to market the corner
    so listen closely if you’re a beginner and new in this text
    make sure your first line has something to do with the next
    You’ll be aight as long as you don’t get off course or stray
    And most important make sure your rhymes aint forced or played
    Follow the 4th it pays! I learned no showing was a no no quick
    Cause there’s nothing in this world wacker than a no show vic
    That’s some homo shit, so if you want your verses to pop online
    Follow the 5th commandment and remember to always drop ontime
    I’ve seen niggas getting wrecked when I was checking the posts
    But it takes a second at most for friends to start protecting the folks
    So rule #6 is stay off aim and never resort to begging for votes
    There’s 4 more commandments but for NOW the session is closed.
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    shit was kinda hard skully
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    Online there’s no copy-rights for your spitting
    So if you want hype for your writtens
    You gotta think sharp like a knife in the kitchen
    Which brings me to rule # 1 there’s no biting or clipping

    Very True... and nice flow!
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  4. 10-01-2007 #4
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    fuckin magnificent

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  5. 10-01-2007 #5
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    nice drop for sure...and i thought i was good at rhyming...shit i still got a lot to learn
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    nice shit......true story wit them commandments homeboi......
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  7. 10-05-2007 #7
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    thanks for the love....
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    props my dude props....u wanna tha nicest on this site...and u stay switching it up
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  9. 10-08-2007 #9
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    ^^Thanks homie, I'm trying to think of the other 4 commandments, does anyone have any ideas?
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    that was dope my dude... nice concept.... one rule could be to fuck wit other dope emcees cuz it will force you to step ur game up... other than that i think u might have covered everything my dude... real spit... keep goin hard on em...

    u should just tellem like this

    "i spit tha real.... you spit tha fake....
    if you was standin right here id spit in ya face!"
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    that was amazing
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    damn...............
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    word, thanks for the props--it means alot.
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    Good shit man. Was a nice read. Id like to hear you on an audio tip.
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    i might finish this off
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    SIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICK, u dont know how often i see rule #1 which is why i hate postin my shit, i get scurred lol...but cotdamn far real, this hasta be the nicest shit i seen in a minute, much props..
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