D.O. Presents: Fallen Soldiers

[PunchlinePrince]

Definite Objective Presents To You An Exclusive Collaboration, Between Two Young, Up And Comin Emcees, Bigdog And PunchlinePrince, It Is Called Fallen Soldiers.........This Is Some REAL SHIT. So Pay Atttention......

BigDog, Kick Things Off First..........

I’m about to let my soul bare, got my back to reality cause sometimes I feel I can’t face it,
I just can’t handle going there, the gravity of losing the biggest man in my life I still can’t take it,
Goin thru life we all know its filled with stages, all went down when I was handling my youth filled rages,
Didn’t appreciate how much a man he was to me, the ignorance of myself to this day amazes,
See I didn’t realize at the time how much I didn’t know, thought I was the big man, got no room to grow,
Pride was my own worst enemy, cause it’s easy to think you the shit til you gotta reap what you sow,
And it’s painful for me to speak on Pops, but through all the pain and hurt I can finally see your mission,
To instill in me a vision that even when nobody around I make the right decision, for one day you’ll be missin,
Ya day came a lot sooner then most, but I thank God you were my father for you gave me a reason to boast,
Taught me to love the right away, keep what’s mine close because only Heaven knows,
When it’s my time to go, and I’m young but death don’t wait for nobody, like my main nigga Hakeem found,
Day before his 20th birthday the cancer hit, prayed you’d take me instead but my wishes went without a sound,
Now ain’t that some shit, the closest thing I had to a brother and seeing you in pain is killing me inside,
Because if I’m still alive and I lose you too, well then they might as well say a third just died,
But I live on in the name of our memories, to do what ya’ll taught me until it’s my time in the end,
There ain’t a doubt in my mind you get all the prayers I send, so fam’s don’t worry, I’ll see you again……

My Nigga BigDog Held It Down, Now It's Time To Bring My Perspective To It......

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When You're At The Residence Of Life, You Never Know When Death's Gonna Knock/
Or When The Seconds Not Ticking No More And There's A Stop To Ya Clock/
So I Sit Down And Write This, In Memory Of Those Who Are Lifeless/
Your Spirits Inspire Me To Make Grab The Microphone And Recite This/
Ya'll Probably Heard A Lotta Stories Bout This, But None As True As Mine/
When I Was 14 Years Old, This Dude That I Was Cool Wit Committed Suicide/
It Mighta Been An Accident, I Only Say That Cause He Was Playin Russian Roulette/
But Joe Shoulda Knew That His Relationship Wit Life Was Goin Down The Drain When He Started Flirtin Wit Death/
April 02, Got Evicted, Had To Move In Wit My Auntie, Great-Grandma Passed Away, Damn It Can't Be/

Then May 31st, My Great-Grandad's Death Turned My Birthday Into My Worst Day, My Life Has Been So Crazy/
But I'ma Move Forward, I'm Can't Waste My Life Mourning, Grieving And Being Regretful/
Cause The Ones I Lost Always Told Me That I Have What It Takes To Become Successful/
None Of My Uncles Got Murdered, But A Lotta Peeps I Know Died From The Bullet Bullet/
I Wish I Could Go Back And Reverse The Target Of The Gun Trigga Before They Pulled It/
And Maybe Some Of Them Would Still Be Livin And Not Underground 6 Feet/
But Until My Last Day Comes, I'ma Hold It Down For Ya'll Until We Meet/
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That's It For Now.......Just A Lil Somethin, Give Ya Honest Feedback. It Will Be Appreciated..........Peace!

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[Youngone]

Very Nice Job D.O.. I Like That Shit A'lot Dawg...

[ShadowBoxing89]

Man, I likes thes collabs, MAybe when i'm not so busy I can join in on these shits.

[yungcease]

i wanna part of that!!!! let me get a verse

[kidhustle]

that shit is nice as hell yo, props

[PunchlinePrince]

Man, I likes thes collabs, MAybe when i'm not so busy I can join in on these shits.

Yea, You Could Shadow, You Nice Wit Them Topicals.....

[penrino]

That's real nice from both of you. Feelin' the topic. Wish I woulda got in on it now.. You both held it down real nice. Solid flow from you Prince and BD's was real deep in detail and didn't hold back on nuttin'. You both did ya thing on this. Very nice!

[Grove~Ryda]

soul flow rite there, on anotha level fo real.. quality drop, content is hella deep n sensitive.. dont normally give str8 10s but the drop surely deserves it.. 10/10 what it D.O.!

[Inept]

lookie the co-sign cadet^


anyway you know what it is, shit is felt, skimmed through it...Ill give some honest actual feed when I have some extra time

trust I aint ignorin the thread I just dont wanna give half-ass feedback and leave it at that

[scarz]

good shit here, feeling the lyrics n content, keep dat up

[Inept]

this was nice you two, am I the only one who seems to think some of the bars look or seem stretched when read aloud? anyway much props I was vibin wit this shouts to DO yall holdin it down

[New York Times]

yeah, the bars were too strecthed and it was hard to catch the flow in both.
Keep writing and keep elevating, but I like d the message.
respect

[PunchlinePrince]

I Know Some Of The Bars Were Stretched, Thanks For The Constructive Criticism And Feedback.

[MurderM]

Great work Doe..

[Heavily Weeded]

Damn how did I miss this for so long? I just don't visit this forum enough I guess...

Anyway...wonderful drop to the both of you. I thought you really worked well together in that you took different angles on the subject of loss. It's something we all feel at one point and time and you both described your perspectives on the subject in good detail.

As far as the bars being stretched, I'm willing to sacrifice that if the content is intensified, which I feel you both did well.

Well done to the both of you.