Youngone Vs Sickvick

[Youngone]

10 Linez
Drop Due On Thurs 12:00am
No Biting, Bitchin, Recyclin, Blah Blah Lol
Me Or U Could Drop First, I Dont Think It Matterz lol
Ne Wayz Good Luck My Dude...Unoo

[sickvick87]

Aight, gotta get this quick win and rep AI, start movin wit them, lets get it.......


Young you used to be aight, but lately you been in a major slump b/
Shit....The way you been "Fallin Off", we can all call you "Humpty Dumpty"/

As Of Right Now I Had Quit EV....Aint No Problem, But I Felt We Are Goin Nowhere And Doin A Whole Lotta Nuthin Lol...

He left his crew behind, sayin "Fuck it, they dont even need me"/
Since he left "EV", I'll put him in the "ER", so he knows there aint no chance he'll "EVER" beat me/ (put it together mufucka)

very good pickup AI....tho switch yall named you startin to make me think of allen iverson instead.....the b-ball player...one

I give you respect for "Steppin", but you dont wanna "Dance" wit me/
^You always say ya "Handles" nice, but you can never Handle me/

He stay talkin like he nice, but his verses are never flattering/
Ya shit is like "Propaganda", "Glittering Generality"/ (Broad statement with no substance if you dont know what that means)

You done been a bitch, you dont bust no slugs, and lyrically you can fuck wit us/
Youngone just like the YoungGunz, his bars are "Tough to Love"/

[Youngone]

Im Equip With Gats Homie, Watch Me Put A Clip In Ya Joint~Hard~With~Slugs~Kid
Listen The Only A.I. Anybody Heard Of Was The Point~Guard~From~The~Nuggets(True Story)

Aight Now
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This Homo Ass Nigga Talks About Dance With Me, I Smell GayNess Around You Fam, Im Sensin~What~You~Startin~To~Do
Hop Off Rappin Homie, Stick To The Swing Sets, Because You Too Young For Beef Like Parental~Barbecues
This Faggot Really Thinks Im Playin, Watch Me Come To Your Block, As I Store~Up~With~Led
Listen, You Rippin Up Pillow Sheets In Your Bedroom, Is The Only Way Youll Ever Tore~Up~A~Thread
You Aint Even Top 15 Let Alone Top 10? So Why You Intend To Lying In Ya Sig~Boss?
You Thinkin You Are The Shit, But I Caught Ya A Few Weeks Back Got Massacred, Tryin~Against~Bigdog
Im Your Idol Nigga, Im The Reason You Started To Rap, So Watch Me Steppin~And~Tairin~Lames
Ill Hand It To You Though My Nig, Good Effort But It Aint Enough For Beatin Young, So Watch Vick (Tore) (Victor) Like Mexican~Inherit-Names
Even Sb Agree Thats You Overrated? With A Rec 33-13 Facing Easy Newbs? I Can Tell, This Peers~Flow~Sounds~Lame
We Can Do A Live Coverage Battle Near Your Kitchen Fam, And Watch Your Career~Go~Down~The~Drain

[Frak]

dam....

Flow: Young (vick had his flow...but youngs had aggression behind his)
Punches: Young (i was feelin alot of his...sick kinda came weak on those)
Personals: Even (nuttn that made a sting youngs were a lil stronger)
Opener: Vick (young kinda fed of his lines..but i was likn that 2nd verse parental BBQs)
Closer: Young (that was a nice punch ....dam one of his best lines)

Overall:
I think young took this, sickV came wit personals that kinda said you suck...narm he had a nice flow to it & used quotes but didnt really make a sting....young on the other hand did sum nice work on his punches, personals were aight, but he ddint really back em up nice in my opinion...nice battle tho to both..

Vote: Young

[Flex]

flow-Vick
punches-Young
personals-Even
opener-Young
closer-Young

overall-I thought that youn had some really nice punches. He started good with the opener and stayed consistent throughtout it till the closer.Vick had good lines and used some quotes from youngone so i found that creative. Both of yall came hard but imma have ta give this battle ta youngone. Nice battle though.

final vote-Youngone

nice battle

[theCRACKZER]

This battle was very nice, SickVick came nice, Youngone came nice

Punches : Youngone
Flow : SickVick
Personals : Tie
Opener : Sick Vick ( haha, humpty dumpty shit was def funny as hell )
Closer : Sick Vick

Sorry that im breaking the chances of this being a ko but this battle was a TIE
WHY???????????????????? SickVick came with weaker punches but he took all the other categories and did slightly better personals thats why i voted personals tie............................ and final vote Tie

[ShadowBoxing89]

Shadow's Full-Break-Down Of Sick Vick's Verse

Aight, gotta get this quick win and rep AI, start movin wit them, lets get it.......


Young you used to be aight, but lately you been in a major slump b/
Shit....The way you been "Fallin Off", we can all call you "Humpty Dumpty"/

First thing thats obvious about this bar is the punchline's played, second even if the punch wasn't played it still wouldn't land because it's not worded
in an effective manner.Instead of "we can call you" you shoulda said"we might aswell call you" that would have connected "Shit....The way you been "Fallin Off"" to the punchline better.

He left his crew behind, sayin "Fuck it, they dont even need me"/
Since he left "EV", I'll put him in the "ER", so he knows there aint no chance he'll "EVER" beat me/ (put it together mufucka)

This was a real good creative punchline. It's Flowed nice with the simple multies you added and was delivered effectively.Setup could have been a little better.


I give you respect for "Steppin", but you dont wanna "Dance" wit me/
^You always say ya "Handles" nice, but you can never Handle me/

This in my eye was personal filler, meaning it was personal but the punch just wasn't enough to make it an effective bar.Plus the rhyme scheme was simple real simple, you rhymed the same word twice and the fact that, that word was a two letter word doesn't help.

He stay talkin like he nice, but his verses are never flattering/
Ya shit is like "Propaganda", "Glittering Generality"/ (Broad statement with no substance if you dont know what that means)

Um, I don't know what to say about this bar.You don't really showcase anything, but you vocab, which is not always a good thing in a battle. the key to a punchline is too create that wow factor or laughter. If people don't understand the vocab then it takes alot away from the punch or whatever
yoou were trying to accomplish in this bar.by the by, the flo was ok and setup needs work.

You done been a bitch, you dont bust no slugs, and lyrically you can fuck wit us/
Youngone just like the YoungGunz, his bars are "Tough to Love"/

Kinda of a simple concept that has been used many times, mostly at the for front of a bar.So it's not really that effective when you use something like this to end a verse.Beside that you had good flow and maybe delivery.

5/10
Some what of an average drop from SV(there was only one effective punch)

[ShadowBoxing89]

Shadow's FUll-Break-Down of Youngone's Verse

Im Equip With Gats Homie, Watch Me Put A Clip In Ya Joint~Hard~With~Slugs~Kid
Listen The Only A.I. Anybody Heard Of Was The Point~Guard~From~The~Nuggets(True Story)

Hmmmm, The Multie's were good, but the gun talk and played concept was not.The first line had nothing to do with the second lline, it didn't even make the punch more effective.

Aight Now
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This Homo Ass Nigga Talks About Dance With Me, I Smell GayNess Around You Fam, Im Sensin~What~You~Startin~To~Do
Hop Off Rappin Homie, Stick To The Swing Sets, Because You Too Young For Beef Like Parental~Barbecues

This was an okay concept that was actually delivered pretty good, considering all the bad setup's you had in your tournament battle.
Punchline was above average and very creative. But the whole beef thing is kinda played.

This Faggot Really Thinks Im Playin, Watch Me Come To Your Block, As I Store~Up~With~Led
Listen, You Rippin Up Pillow Sheets In Your Bedroom, Is The Only Way Youll Ever Tore~Up~A~Thread

YOu had a good concept but couldn't use it to it's full potential,Because the wording was alittle off in thee end.And again the gun talk is not helping you at all YO.And yes yes the multies were ok, but didn't flow as smoothly as the previous

You Aint Even Top 15 Let Alone Top 10? So Why You Intend To Lying In Ya Sig~Boss?
You Thinkin You Are The Shit, But I Caught Ya A Few Weeks Back Got Massacred, Tryin~Against~Bigdog

The wording was off, which destoryed the whole bar for me. Cause it was turning out to be a solid bar until you stopped speaking proper english.

"A Few Weeks Back Got Massacred, Tryin~Against~Bigdog"
^This is were it went wrong.

Im Your Idol Nigga, Im The Reason You Started To Rap, So Watch Me Steppin~And~Tairin~Lames
Ill Hand It To You Though My Nig, Good Effort But It Aint Enough For Beatin Young, So Watch Vick (Tore) (Victor) Like Mexican~Inherit-Names

The wordplay was off a bit and wasn't in the right context,Seemed forced.
and your lines are long as hell, you should add more multies or shorten them shits up.With that said the flow was still okay to say the least.

Even Sb Agree Thats You Overrated? With A Rec 33-13 Facing Easy Newbs? I Can Tell, This Peers~Flow~Sounds~Lame
We Can Do A Live Coverage Battle Near Your Kitchen Fam, And Watch Your Career~Go~Down~The~Drain

Again good concept bad wording. Man you coulda had a real dope verse here. cause your coming original. but the way you deliver must of these lines makes you seem ignorant, LMFAOo. J/k . you just need to work on the wording though, cuz thats the olny thing holding you back here.

6.5/10

He had concept that he couldn't word effectively

I vote- Youngone I ain't going to do a rubric cuz I didnt even feel like voting.

[penrino]

Why is everyone tryna duck no vote links? I'm disappointed!

Youngone wins via TKO.