I'll Murk Ya Chances!

[InCizion]

http://www.hiphopgame.com/forums/showthread.php?t=39404

http://www.hiphopgame.com/forums/showthread.php?t=39337
Yeah... I read it^ LOL....SMH!...

Circumstances Murk Chances just too Work Them DAMAGES
Brake out the Bandages cuz I’m well Versed like Ahem Passages
Don’t Pretend ya don’t know who the Man Is & has Advantages
As I Blast Stances like my Stanzas Slam Plans & Casts Savages
Just 2 Trash Stands like Blasphemous Stans & Masks Trashin Us
As MC’s Forecasts Shams, Blastin Us, left Blind like After Dust
Than the Laughter Erupts as I Capture ya Fucks & Disaster Busts
As a Rapture of Such that’ll Manufacture Ducks & Plaster Punks
Now I’m
Leavin Most in a Funk when Upheavin Ghosts believin in a Hunt
Left Pleadin in Dumps like when Achievin Boasts That’s a Front
With No Facts unless it’s a Chump Exceedin Posts that’s a Cunt
As Triple Brrratts that’s Impedin Runts! Like I’m the Host, SON
Best Believe I’ll Toast One with a Flow that’ll Deep Post SOME
Left in a Heap with No Hope Son, So can Ya Cope 1, Nope Done
Leavin ya Feelin in a Choke Hold & Stunned as I TOAK ONE!!!
Left ya as the Exposed One, As I sip the Cold One & Poke Huns

[O-ficial]

NOT YOUR BEST BUT STILL NICE
PRETTY NICE LINES WITH YOUR USUAL WORDING.
DOPE MULTI'S AND FLIPS
PROPS HOMIE

[InCizion]

Uppin.........................

[Gotham]

pretty hot verse, but i was expectin that from u lol....multis were definitely on point and they really elevate the verse to a new level, i was feelin them with this drop. real nice

[scarz]

multi's was above average, on the abstract side, so the logic behind the lyrics was a lil unclear, but im ure on a beat, with an aggresive approach , pendin the voice could sound hot

[InCizion]

Uppin............................................. .......

[InCizion]

Is there a reason why your posting your rhyme in my thread?......SMH

[penrino]

I thought I had commented on this already.. Anyhow.. It's a dope piece of writing, I seen better from you though.. I think you over did it a lil' with the multis, they give it mad flows.. But the story itself lacks a little. Although it ain't much of a story, I just felt some of the lines were forced because of the multis. But I like the switch up in styles that you usin'... Nice shit.

The extra verse been deleted too.

[Kim Yiu]

garbage nuff said

[InCizion]

garbage nuff said

Fuck You...




You look like that Dumb Ass Killer from V Tech... Bitch!

[Dat Guy]

Fuck You...




You look like that Dumb Ass Killer from V Tech... Bitch!

lol.......dats fucked up what happened at v tech though.....

nice verse though b, shit would probably be hardbody if you spit that in da booth...

[New York Times]

your message was extremeyl lost in translation...I feel like you were rhyming, but you weren't making any sense.

I read your Verse, and I didn't have ANY idea of what you were talking about.

Nice try though. come harder next time.