Punchline Prince vs. `Rino

[PunchlinePrince]

16 Lines
3-0 TKO Or First To 5
House Rules
No Crew Votes......

I'ma Drop First, Most Likely Tomorrow.....

Waitin On Ya Check In.....

[`rino]

Check check... & I ain't got a problem wit' DO votin' bruh... We all VIT here.. Any vote should be allowed.

[PunchlinePrince]

That's True Rino, We Just Gotta Make Sure The Votes Are Fair And Square....

[PunchlinePrince]

I Told Ya'll It's D.O. Season............

First Off, It's Definite That My Objective Is To Damage Ya/
I'll Get Rid Of AI (Λι) Quicker Than Philly's General Manager/
Rino Is The First Mercenary I Send To The Cemetary/
The Day He Beats Me In Battle Is The 33rd Of Neverary/

The Shit's Not Happenin, Like Them Knock Out Kings Comin Back/
You Left Cause You Knew Without Me, Shit Was Gone Be Fuckin Wack/
I Shook Up The World Joinin D.O., Ya Crew Moves Barely On The Richter/
Even 'Romans' Know That If 'LM' Dropped '1050' Verses, They Still Wouldn't Be Spitters!/(Roman Numerals)

Ain't 'Christian' A Wrestler? My Rhymes 'Spear' Ya To The Canvas, You Lackin The 'Edge'/
Not Talkin Bout The 'VE Dude', But You Betta Off Drivin Ya Self Off The Ledge/
Ya 'Steel Soldier' Or Ya 'Hip Hop Police' Can't Even Provide Enough Protection/
Cause Havin A 'Problem Wit PP', You Would Rather Have A 'Urine Infection'!/

PP Got You Pissed, And You Still Can't Spit A Flow This Mean/
I Str8 Aim At Ya Bird Ass Like Spoken's Team, Now You Joe B, Broken Wings!/
Fall To The Ground, Leave You And Ya Career Slain In 'Hackaney'/
Don't Need Mayor To A-Town Stomp Rino Until The Gravel's Crackin B/

That's My Drop.................

[`rino]

Yo, Prince, I respect you a hell of a lot, bruh. You know this shit.. So don't take any offense to what you're about to read.. I also respect DO.. Luckily I didn't throw that many shots at you lot... So keep calm! Once again, mad respect, Prince! But. For now.. WE'RE ENEMIES!

You signed me to KOK, I admit U WAS better.. But now I'm better than you!
So U had to beat Def. Obj. first so you could actually be the best in a crew!
[Wooo! Like it! Like it!]

Look how ya changed ya face av to Bria's ass 'cos ya mug was frightenin', P!
So tell me, Prince, how does it feel to be replacin' the biggest biter we seen?
[His av' used to have a picture of him and then Bria's ass...]

Fiending others material, man.. What's it like bein' a replacement of a whore?
Ai the new crew making moves, dispatch the whacks 'n Jason off the board!
[Jason/Chase 'em.. Haha, Jason is PP's name.. Btw..]

I dropped this bar like a heavyweight stone and it knocked J-roc outta wind
& Even if you born on May 31st, Dat Mitten you hold couldn't box out a win!
[May 31st.. Boxer Rebellion... Dat Mitten.. LOCATION CHECK!]

I'ma 'Do Ya Crew Intials Twice' And 'Shit' On Ya Team/(DODO)

The Prince wasn't a reputable heir to the throne, so the Kings threw him out
I dun need to tell ppl what U think of DO.. U already know what ya crew about
[Oooh, burnt his own clique! Haha]

'Who are you'? Jroc, J, Prince, Punchline, but someone ain't forgot his name
'cos the only people knowin' ya name are the toddlers learnin' to potty train
[Pee Pee/PP.. Haha!!]

Joined DO so he could C H eye2eye, excell on levels but that crew needs help
So, I'll call him the PunLinePrince 'cos everything he spits is an insult to himself
[OH DAMN!]

I admit I looked upto you, but I'm a rebel pupil who doesn't fear teachers..
& If it don't work out for you at DO.. AI could ALWAYS DO WIT' A CHEERLEADER!!!
[Damn, man.. Just.. Damn!]

[PunchlinePrince]

Nice Drop Rino. All Votes Are Welcome, As Long As They Are Fair.....

[ShadowBoxing89]

lmfao, yall nigga's are not voting on other battles(well rino did a couple, but not p) so what makes you think yo shit'll get voted on,. LMFAO

vote on my battle and i'll vote on this one....

[$poke!]

opener....PP...rino' opener was nice...but I think PP's just struck a lil' harder

punches....PP...I like rino's punches..but PP just seemed to put a lil' bit more into his

personals....Rino...PP has some nice personals...but I think rino' edged him out on this category tho both threw some decent ones

wordplay....Rino...I did like PP's wordplay shit was nice! thanks for the shout!
But I liked rino's a lil better he seemed to have it going pretty much through his whole verse!

enjoyment....Tie..both of these verses were pretty enjoyable...which is good..cause I hate boring reads!..props ya'll!


closer...Rino!... I liked PP's closer..which was nice! but Rino's Allen Iverson Reference was pretty damn good!


overall...

Very good battle was a real tight one! really hard to decide!

But Imma have to vote Rino'.....

NOthing from PP...both had tight verses...very close to decide a winner!
but I guess the closer was the deciding factor!

Damn good verse!

Thx 4 tha shout PP!
Return tha Luv peeps!

[Edge]

opener- PP (pen urs didnt it hard at all to me)
closer- pen (by a mile, his was funny as hell)
punches- pp(prince had some nice ass punches that would win a street battle)
personals-pen(pp started of hot wit the personals but then he feel off, his last four lines werent personal at all/ while pen's whole verse was personal)
flow- tie (neither were chopped or contained multis)

vote-Pen

Prince verse would have easily won if he got more persoanal! Pen some of ur personals didnt stick out that much to me, they didnt hit hard at all! But on the other hand Pen they were personals! So i had to go wit Pen on this one!
I would've like to see a better effort from u 2! Stay up 1

[ShadowBoxing89]

i GOTTA GO TO WORK, SO I'LL VOTE WHEN I GET BACK.......

[DJ Vegas]

Punches: Prince
Personals: Rino
Multies: Prince
Flow: Prince
Wordplay: Rino

Final Vote: Prince

***This battle was much closer than i had expected. Rino's verse was crazy but Prince edged him just a bit. This is just my opinion but Rino has stepped his game up a lot and should be feared.***

[ShadowBoxing89]

Shadows Full-Break-Down of Prince Verse

First Off, It's Definite That My Objective Is To Damage Ya/
I'll Get Rid Of AI (Λι) Quicker Than Philly's General Manager/

Um, Lets see. I would give you props for a solid operner.but these sports
lines are played completely IMO.Unless you get mad creative these team
player refercnes aren't working.Cause there to easy.I doesn't take that much thought to put together a punch like this.(i'm not knocking you prince, it's the truth)(Flow was good, Setup was decent).

Rino Is The First Mercenary I Send To The Cemetary/
The Day He Beats Me In Battle Is The 33rd Of Neverary/

Ok this was Ok LMFAO.It's kinda elementary in some ways. but at the same time it seems to be effective(the comedic aspect of it)(Flow was above average setup was ok, you could have linked the last loine to the setup by adding cause before the).

The Shit's Not Happenin, Like Them Knock Out Kings Comin Back/
You Left Cause You Knew Without Me, Shit Was Gone Be Fuckin Wack/

Solid personal, I felt it could have been flipped better. but I hold no suggestions.Beside the personal, there was really nothing here to get excited about.(Flow was good,setup was good).


I Shook Up The World Joinin D.O., Ya Crew Moves Barely On The Richter/
Even 'Romans' Know That If 'LM' Dropped '1050' Verses, They Still Wouldn't Be Spitters!/(Roman Numerals)

I have nothing to say about this line really.I'm still baffled by the punch.
I see the concept of roman numerals, but the overall punch was kinda weak.
I was expecting a better finish to this bar.( it seemed complex, but ended rather simple)It wasn't setup in way that'll make it effective.(Flow was good, setup was sub par).

Symbol Value
I 1 (one) (unus)
V 5 (five) (quinque)
X 10 (ten) (decem)
L 50 (fifty) (quinquaginta)
C 100 (one hundred) (centum)
D 500 (five hundred) (quingenti)
M 1000 (one thousand) (mille)

For does who don't get this bar^




Ain't 'Christian' A Wrestler? My Rhymes 'Spear' Ya To The Canvas, You Lackin The 'Edge'/
Not Talkin Bout The 'VE Dude', But You Betta Off Drivin Ya Self Off The Ledge/

Well, the concepts kinda played out on this site.(J quality used it on edge, I used it on J quality)And"Ain't 'Christian' A Wrestler?" seemed out of place even though you referenced the spear and wrestling/ it wasn't place in the right spot.Shit, I don't know.(flow was good, setup lack luster IMO)

Ya 'Steel Soldier' Or Ya 'Hip Hop Police' Can't Even Provide Enough Protection/
Cause Havin A 'Problem Wit PP', You Would Rather Have A 'Urine Infection'!/

This was ok right here.even though I've tired this on you. but mine didn't work so well.Anyways nice name flip.You doing something I haven't seen aot cats do except for myself and maybe Vegas.(name flips that is)(Flow was good setup was ok, could have been better IMO).

PP Got You Pissed, And You Still Can't Spit A Flow This Mean/
I Str8 Aim At Ya Bird Ass Like Spoken's Team, Now You Joe B, Broken Wings!/

Eeeh I Wasn't really feeling this bar(mainly becasue you tried double the wwordplay which is good if used correctly, You had a played concept and one I just wasn't feeling).(Flow was straight, setup not good)

Fall To The Ground, Leave You And Ya Career Slain In 'Hackaney'/
Don't Need Mayor To A-Town Stomp Rino Until The Gravel's Crackin B/

This was an weak closer....IMO

Overall-This was a solid effort by PP, But I felt he could have done better, starting with his lack of a better setup and no sports line lMFAO.

[ShadowBoxing89]

Shadow's Full-Break-Down of Rino's Verse

You signed me to KOK, I admit U WAS better.. But now I'm better than you!
So U had to beat Def. Obj. first so you could actually be the best in a crew!
[Wooo! Like it! Like it!]

This was ok,. But not ally a gut wrenching blow. it was kinda like a compliment(You said he the best ina crew and that he defeated DO/you said he was better).(Flow was good, setup was ok).

Look how ya changed ya face av to Bria's ass 'cos ya mug was frightenin', P!
So tell me, Prince, how does it feel to be replacin' the biggest biter we seen?
[His av' used to have a picture of him and then Bria's ass...]

Damn Rino, I see you trying the personals out, but the way you got them delivered takes away there effective-ness.(flow was good always, setup
was ok).

Fiending others material, man.. What's it like bein' a replacement of a whore?
Ai the new crew making moves, dispatch the whacks 'n Jason off the board!
[Jason/Chase 'em.. Haha, Jason is PP's name.. Btw..]

self hype's not a good idea. especially when it's ending the bar.
(setup was not good, flow was ok)


I dropped this bar like a heavyweight stone and it knocked J-roc outta wind
& Even if you born on May 31st, Dat Mitten you hold couldn't box out a win!
[May 31st.. Boxer Rebellion... Dat Mitten.. LOCATION CHECK!]

This was ok, alot better than the previous, made me chuckle a bit(I guest)
Set was solid, flow was good

The Prince wasn't a reputable heir to the throne, so the Kings threw him out
I dun need to tell ppl what U think of DO.. U already know what ya crew about
[Oooh, burnt his own clique! Haha]

lol, this was good, finally a personal I can laugh to( i was afriad you didn't have t in ya).But the first personal was kinda false, cuz P left KOK.(Flow was good, setup was better).


'Who are you'? Jroc, J, Prince, Punchline, but someone ain't forgot his name
'cos the only people knowin' ya name are the toddlers learnin' to potty train
[Pee Pee/PP.. Haha!!]

um, PLAYED!!!!!!,Besides the fact that i used. P used it to in the verse in this battle so...flamed(Flow was good, setup not good. i thought you were going for a different punch/way to finish)

Joined DO so he could C H eye2eye, excell on levels but that crew needs help
So, I'll call him the PunLinePrince 'cos everything he spits is an insult to himself
[OH DAMN!]

There was some of ok wordplay and some avrag wordplay in this line IMO
Overall this was an ok bar(flow was good, setup could have ben better).

I admit I looked upto you, but I'm a rebel pupil who doesn't fear teachers..
& If it don't work out for you at DO.. AI could ALWAYS DO WIT' A CHEERLEADER!!!
[Damn, man.. Just.. Damn!]

lol, this was ok right here, a solid effort to finish the battle.Flow was real good, setup ws decent)

OVerall- This verse was better than the one he used on Edge, but like
in the battle with edge he started off weak, with the none effective personals and picked it up alittle towards the end.

[ShadowBoxing89]

Shadow's Final Vote

Punches-Rino(p's Punchlines weren't what I was expecting)
Flow/Multies-Tie(Both verse flowed well)
Wordplay/Nameplay-Tie(both attempted the same amount, both verses failed to deliver some of them effectively IMO)
Personals-Rino(rino's verse started with a couple lack luster personals, then he got more efective with them towards the end.P didn't really have thta many)

Overall-Rino gets this IMO...

[`rino]

C'mon, HHG. Uppin' the tko.

[Frak]

This was a close battle...madd funny & personal...

Flow: Even (both hit this nice)
Personal: Rino (punch did his thing, but rinos swung harder)
Punches: Even (they both had there good & bads)
Opener: PP (he opened nice...)
Closer: Rino (one of his best lines)

Overall: This was a closer battle, both had funny factors, & personals were there on both sides, but one just got the words in there betta...nahm
I really think the personals rino got & that closer...got him this..diff. sick battle

Vote: Rino

[`rino]

4-1.. TKO.. Great battle, Prince.. We'll meet again.. First clash of a few down the line, I'd imagine. Respect, playa. I'm now officially a Heavyweight.

Thanks to all who voted!