Sick Vicks
14 Lines Goin At Scar.......
Aight......Check It.......
Scar a bitch, net he aight, but in real life I heared he was wack/
He could have a funeral for his rhymebook and still not kill a verse or murder a track/
Concepts played and the setup seemed random, cause it had nothing
connecting it to the final line like an "Cause" or "and".
I'm murkin this cat, he think he nice but all ya drops is lame/
You know you a bitch when lay a diss but refuse to drop the names/
This bar is segregated , meaning one line does not fall into thee other
You shouda added “and” at the beginning of the second line. Cuz it’s like your insulting somebody and just happen to rhyme. (there’s no connection between the two bars.
"I'm murkin this cat, he think he nice but all ya drops is lame"
And isn’t “ya” suppose to be “his” in the first line since you started with he. So you should fix errors before Sending ya verse to J or drop it yourself in regular battles. Cause just by having a misspelled word you can ruining a good punch line.By the way nice personal
Ya crew comedians,you think you sick, but We be bringin faggots cancer/
Just face the facts son, Ya clique funny like Adam Sandler/
(I know yall seen that click movie)
The setup was better right here, but still, it could have been done better IMO,The overall punch was str8 generic, you could have used in comedian name to fill that slot, you can change "faggot cancer" into"Moe Sand"
and change "Adam sandler" into "rose-an"(the fat lady , spelt name wrong).
My talent level's freakish, haters relax and read it/
You talkin bout ya track, naaa, ya whole career be "A Little Secret"/ (No one knows you)
Sick you really need to work on your setup Homie, cuz you have the right idea's but can'tdeliver them well, when ya setup doesn't even relate to the final punch.ou want from talking about your self to talking about scar, all in one bar.
Aint much that I agree wit, and I got respect for you reppin ya crew/
But yall holdin 9 dudes, and 8 of em better then you/
False personal, more like an insult,But, you did have the setup right this time and i suppose you should get some sort of credit for that.Flow was good overall your best bar IMO.
And duke avy say he pimpin, stick wit that, you gon need luck to win this/
Plus battlin FemaleMC the only time you fuck wit a bitch/(
you aint pimpin)
Ok, this is a good example of a good setup. But again your not really saying nothing, this can't be considered a personal unless you have proof of his outside life.
My bars bring murder, so you know I'll see you up in hell holmes/
This murda, cuz its only called assassination if the victims well known/
(You aint shit)
I don't know why the "this murda" was place in the last line, cuz the punch
could have been more effective without it,then again taking away "this murder" probaly wouldn't have helped either, the whole bar was just worded wrong IMO.
4/10 Lack of a proper setup and effectiveness
14 Lines At SickVick (Me)
When I saw Scar name I almost killed myself but I was frightened at least/
I thought I was heavyweight level till BD beat me twice in a week/
LMFAO, this shit was funny, setup was ok, flow was good punch was good.Ad overall the personal was grrrrreeaattt!
I'm talkin bout I wasnt tryin, but you know thats just an excuse/
For my filler bars I spit when I got nothin to use/
Nice solid effective personal, setup was real good, flowed nicely
I'm just a net rapper, I never get around to the beats/
Just call me grass the way I never will get found in the streets/
ll,Good creative orginal punch, I never seen nothing like, but it's not Necessarily true grass has away of coming threw cracks on old roads
But I know Ima bitch, Obviously aint nobody scared of me/
I act like a Lyrical Assassin, then get Assassinated, Lyrically/
lol, Your punching yourself harder then you did Sp, Overall good bars
I've seen someone use the same concept agint your crew though.
And all my rhymes are fake son, I never spit it real/
I act like I run LA but Im just a hype man for Tic and Steel/
LOL, shits true LMFAO(Just kidding or am I)Um flow,setup,personal
were all good.
Its obviously my rhymes weak, read my verse, the shits lame/
Then I got emotionally happy last round for the first time beatin a big name/
First line true, yo batle verse were you were suppose to go at sp was
average at best.So this is an real effective punch/personal IMO.
Deep down I wish I could run motha fuckas over/
So fuck this whole drop, I guess my run of luck is over/
Well , with this bar it is, shit was lazy, oyu didn't ven try, I guest thats part of the concept surounding this part of the drop.
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Overall-His battle verse was the weakest i've seen from him. i lacked setup effective personals and fucking direction.His drop aginst himself was funny i laughed at just about every bar even if I didn't put LOL begin of my breakdown's.
7.5 or 8/10
SPScarface vs Sick Vick - ROUND 3
Originally Posted by Jthamind
