Steel Soldier Vs. Fundamental

[steel soldier]

12-16 lines

the rest is house rules

Good luck..You need a vote link to battle but I got you this time

[steel soldier]

Ill have the vote links in a min

Hit ya with a combo but this aint no karate, You cant “blast steel” you have no shotty//
I know dudes talking how ima kill you But how can you get personal on a no body//
This battles sorta like the end of a letter cause ya closures near//
Fund couldn’t make it at HHA so he thought why not try over here//
I got you stunned and shocked, Ya careers about to be done and shot//
You just got sonned and rocked, You broke, Ya names the only funds you got//
You’ve been out done a lot, I return smarts, Spit flame, Let ya burn apart//
Ill spurn ya start, Plus ya careers hittin the wall like Dale Earnhardt//
The thrones higher, Thinkin you could beat me…Now your a known Liar//
And its time to “hang up ya mic”..Like throwin Jordans on the phone wire//
Don’t front or get jumped and Offed and cooked, You so soft and shook//
You could spit ya lines over a cordless phone they still wont be off the hook//

[mrpure86]

Garbage...............

[steel soldier]

..Cool thanks for ya feed on it..Dont bother me tho =)

[steel soldier]

uppin ya verse homie

[fundamental]

aiigh i here ill start now

[fundamental]

I’m simply kickin ur ass homie and leavin a dent-in-ur-tush
Because I steal soldiers more often then fuckin president-bush
U aint touchin-tha-great, just watch ur face cuz im bustin-with-hate
Last people be feelin “LA” was when they was touchin-the-place
This guy whack-kid, probably has dandriff and man-tits
Ur flow sux just dam-it, No-one feelin steel, not even mechanics
Smack u in the face with a dirt-shovel n leave u with hurt-muscles
U in worse-trouble Ima b takin the parts of soldier like kurt-russle
Watch me kill you and use ur body to dig a hole to bury-ya-mom
Call ursefl a soldier? But ud run away if u saw that I carry-a-gun
If u make n amblum no one would buy-that, laugh when ya spine-crack
U rhyme-whack I couldn’t be a victim of this soldier if I was livin in Iraq

whatever a key

[ShadowBoxing89]

yall HHA kids, stuck on that Bush bull shit......................................
you would think right about now that shit would be played

[`rino]

Aight.. I'mma vote when I get back.. Shit, Funda.. That's a weak drop by ya standards, bruh...

[fundamental]

lol ^ i know it was a key

[Paladin]

breakdown ....

Hit ya with a combo but this aint no karate, You cant “blast steel” you have no shotty//
I know dudes talking how ima kill you But how can you get personal on a no body//
OK ... A JAB
This battles sorta like the end of a letter cause ya closures near//
Fund couldn’t make it at HHA so he thought why not try over here//
OK ... A LITTLE JAB
I got you stunned and shocked, Ya careers about to be done and shot//
You just got sonned and rocked, You broke, Ya names the only funds you got//
THIS WAS BETTER
You’ve been out done a lot, I return smarts, Spit flame, Let ya burn apart//
Ill spurn ya start, Plus ya careers hittin the wall like Dale Earnhardt//
OK AGAIN
The thrones higher, Thinkin you could beat me…Now your a known Liar//
And its time to “hang up ya mic”..Like throwin Jordans on the phone wire//
OK ...
Don’t front or get jumped and Offed and cooked, You so soft and shook//
You could spit ya lines over a cordless phone they still wont be off the hook//
FIRST LINE WAS EH ... SECOND I LIKED


I’m simply kickin ur ass homie and leavin a dent-in-ur-tush
Because I steal soldiers more often then fuckin president-bush
SLIGHTLY PLAYED, BUT YOUR NEW HERE SO IT'S OK
U aint touchin-tha-great, just watch ur face cuz im bustin-with-hate
Last people be feelin “LA” was when they was touchin-the-place
NICE RHYME SCHEME, WEAK PERSONAL
This guy whack-kid, probably has dandriff and man-tits
Ur flow sux just dam-it, No-one feelin steel, not even mechanics
FIRST LINE WEAK, SECOND PLAYED
Smack u in the face with a dirt-shovel n leave u with hurt-muscles
U in worse-trouble Ima b takin the parts of soldier like kurt-russle
OK
Watch me kill you and use ur body to dig a hole to bury-ya-mom
Call ursefl a soldier? But ud run away if u saw that I carry-a-gun
EH
If u make n amblum no one would buy-that, laugh when ya spine-crack
U rhyme-whack I couldn’t be a victim of this soldier if I was livin in Iraq

EH AGAIN

I LIKE FUNDS RHYME SCHEME AND HE DEFINITELY GOT SOME SKILLS BUT STEEL TOOK THIS IN PRETTY MUCH EVERYTHING EXCEPT MULTI'S BUT MULTI'S DON'T WIN BATTLES ...
VOTE: STEEL

NICE JOB GUYS GOOD BATTLE

[steel soldier]

Good looks on the vote P

Im up 1-0 uppin more votes

[steel soldier]

uppin this ish HHG

[Forum]

Ok i hate voting.. but aighht umm Lets get right to it

Flow: Tie
(both of yall had a flow that i actually could keep up n didn't stumble reading along the lines... you both were very fluently with ya words, and manage to keep both ya verse popping..//

Opener: Steel Soldier
(Hit ya with a combo but this aint no karate, You cant “blast steel” you have no shotty//
I know dudes talking how ima kill you But how can you get personal on a no body//) that shit was hard even if Fundamental shit was nice to n i believe hurted Steel soldier a little bit with that punche, about bush.. its kinda new to me cause i haven't really heard a line like that about steel..

Closer : NEITHER
( i aint gonna pick one of you cause both ya closers were garbage to be honest, i mean i heard different versions of it from both closers.. and i wasn't feeling none of it, i believe not one of you have a good closer so i pick NEITHER)

Sting (Metas-personal-puncheline-etc.)

Steel Soldier:- "Hit ya with a combo but this aint no karate, You cant “blast steel” you have no shotty//
I know dudes talking how ima kill you But how can you get personal on a no body//

that was a decent personal....... That shit had me rolling a little bit, shit was hot

This battles sorta like the end of a letter cause ya closures near//
Fund couldn’t make it at HHA so he thought why not try over here//


I got you stunned and shocked, Ya careers about to be done and shot//
You just got sonned and rocked, You broke, Ya names the only funds you got//

^^ ehhhhhhhhh it was aight

The thrones higher, Thinkin you could beat me…Now your a known Liar//
And its time to “hang up ya mic”..Like throwin Jordans on the phone wire//

Some thing new with flare.. even tho its basic

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Fundamental:- "U aint touchin-tha-great, just watch ur face cuz im bustin-with-hate
Last people be feelin “LA” was when they was touchin-the-place

^ that shit was fuckin sexy........... basic but still it was hot to me

This guy whack-kid, probably has dandriff and man-tits
Ur flow sux just dam-it, No-one feelin steel, not even mechanics
^ the first line was fucking garbage, and no point to even put that up...
but the only reason i put this in Sting cause i like the ending.. that shit was a hard personal n punche line.. good shit.(the last bar)

Sting : Steel Soldier (cause of the seat up)

Overall: Steel Soldier
( i broke it down, And Fundamental is nice he has a good mind of how to serve niggas in a punce n personal n with his meta's n ETC.. but the way he setup the killer bars, i wasn't just feeling it, in other hand Steel soldier this wasn't an impressive verse neither... You had some lines i actually was feeling like Fundamental's but i believe Steels hit harder cause of the set up n every thing) good battle 1

[steel soldier]

Good looks on the vote..You aint gotta break it down that much haha but its appreciated

Im up 2-0

[ShadowBoxing89]

STEEL

Hit ya with a combo but this aint no karate, You cant “blast steel” you have no shotty//
I know dudes talking how ima kill you But how can you get personal on a no body//

This is a good opener, and a good personal IMO. It flowed nice,and setup was ok

This battles sorta like the end of a letter cause ya closures near//
Fund couldn’t make it at HHA so he thought why not try over here//

hmmm, This was a good bar, but it seemed like you were dissing HHG
though at the end(your basically saying, he saw this as a weaker text site
and ended it right there. Which is a bad idea, i was looking for the final blow
to this good setup).

I got you stunned and shocked, Ya careers about to be done and shot//
You just got sonned and rocked, You broke, Ya names the only funds you got//

this was ok, flow was on point. Setup was real good cause both lines were about the same topic IMO.(you said his career is over and when your careers over ya lose money so, good setup and final blow

You’ve been out done a lot, I return smarts, Spit flame, Let ya burn apart//
Ill spurn ya start, Plus ya careers hittin the wall like Dale Earnhardt//

Lol, another good punch here, but it is basically like the pervious line(meaning your saying the same thing, just using different content).

The thrones higher, Thinkin you could beat me…Now your a known Liar//
And its time to “hang up ya mic”..Like throwin Jordans on the phone wire//

This was ok, coulda been better though. Flow was nice, setup was average it also seems like you still stuck on that career retire concept.

Don’t front or get jumped and Offed and cooked, You so soft and shook//
You could spit ya lines over a cordless phone they still wont be off the hook//

decent concept that coulda been flipped way better, But I give you props for trying,and flow was ok.

Fundamental

I’m simply kickin ur ass homie and leavin a dent-in-ur-tush
Because I steal soldiers more often then fuckin president-bush

This shit is played out, it's played on your site and is played on this one
fund, But you get alittle credit for effort(trying to use it differently I guess)

U aint touchin-tha-great, just watch ur face cuz im bustin-with-hate
Last people be feelin “LA” was when they was touchin-the-place

this shit's generic at best, it's like me saying you wouldn't feel a cat unless you touched a cat. Multies were good though(thats about it).

This guy whack-kid, probably has dandriff and man-tits
Ur flow sux just dam-it, No-one feelin steel, not even mechanics

ok, this coulda been better if you woulda put more effort into the setup, but you didn't there for it was a complete waste.
Fund you not repping yo site at all with this poor drop.


Smack u in the face with a dirt-shovel n leave u with hurt-muscles
U in worse-trouble Ima b takin the parts of soldier like kurt-russle

well, ok i'll give you alittle something for this, but again good punch concept bad setup.

Watch me kill you and use ur body to dig a hole to bury-ya-mom
Call ursefl a soldier? But ud run away if u saw that I carry-a-gun

This was ok, above average. Flow was good and delivery was better

If u make n amblum no one would buy-that, laugh when ya spine-crack
U rhyme-whack I couldn’t be a victim of this soldier if I was livin in Iraq

your nameplay is ok,but your setups are lacking which takes steam away from the final blow.You start off with taking or hurting his body then you deliver a punch.

Punches-Steel(his shit was setup better and delivered better)
Wordplay/Nameplay-Steel
Flow/Multies-Tie(Both had good flow threw out)
Personals-Steel(there wasn't really none)

Overall-Steel Gets this easy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[steel soldier]

KO add it to the list SB