kidhu$tle vs Octane (TOPICALLLLO)

[kidhustle]

Topic: What do u see urself to be in da future (what u gone acheive), just pure imagination homie.
Im gone drop tomorrow cuz i gots to do some shit and i aint gone be online,so if u wanna drop,feel free cuz its a topical and it dont matter if u drop first or i drop first or maybe NOT!!!!!

[kidhustle]

http://www.hiphopgame.com/forums/sho...d=1#post496478
I couldnt find any battles to vote on,no1's got battles goin right now so,im using a link i used earlier.Im gone drop afta a lil

[kidhustle]

ey yo here's mine. 22 lines i think.drop whenever u can,no deadline homie

i see myself something big in da near future
hotter than a volcano's erupture
colder than a winter in london
brighter than than tha sun's glow, way faster than tha nile's flow
i see myself a PIMP makin lots of doe,
i'll compare myself to a weed plant and see who's faster to grow
i'll be da world's best emcee
a streit up killah, a real G,no 1 will wannit wit me
most record labels tryin to get they hands on me,i'll be da MJ of rap
all my shit gone be rated 5 stars
and da most i'll ever do 'll be 40 bars
its because of da rep and respect i got
unlike other rappers who just want money and think they hot
my celeb status 'll be O+++ but i aint gone ansa to tha media
cuz real niggaz stay to themselves and dont expose they criteria
i'll be on da A list of people u want to murder
i'll da most wanted dead or alive NO_1
i'll be a real playa,dont need to always pack my gun
i'll never wear a vest like these wannabe faggots
cuz if god wrote for me to die than its streit to my hearse/anyways
i'll die my head held up high in glory,but dat wont be THE END of MY STORy

[Octane]

In the future I see me as a symbol of Love/
The heart,soul and the inspiration of thugs/
Spittn words of wisdom to those who has been guided wrong/
A visual of what youngns can be if they determined long/
The gold soul to those who think life mistreated them/
A father to lost souls when there pops discreted them/
The eyes of the blinded and the ears of the def/
The hope of the world for those who wasn't blees with good health/
The role model to boys with dreams and unchanted luck/
The voice to lil girls telln them to keep their pants up/
That nigga people see that is well respected/
No longer being rejected futher more neglected/
Girls see me and realize that I am that nigga/
Easily the voice inspiring alcholics to put down that liquor/
Coaching a b.ball team for those who didnt make it/
Teaching niggas to b-real and stop tryna to fake it/
Its a bright future and fighting against the odd/
But if I dont achieve then I'll just leave it up to GOD/
http://www.hiphopgame.com/forums/sho...t=35107&page=2

[Tightest Titan]

I don't know if it was just a weak topic, or you guys take on it. I am going towards the latter though. Well, both of you were extremely basic. considering this is about future aspirations, I find the goals a bit, umm limited. But I guess whatever goals you have are irrelevant, as long as you present it well in a topical. Kid, well, I don't want to say you don't suck, so I guess I won't say anything at all. Octane did better with a verse that was mediocore at best. Certainly anyone with any sort of ability could have beaten Octanes verse, but his saving grace was that Kids verse was just hideous to read. No hate to either of you.


votectane

[kidhustle]

http://www.hiphopgame.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35107
this battle is only 2 days old but its in da archives.So will dat count

[Octane]

I know this shit aint hot thread but the vote is the votes at

[Paladin]

kinda hurt to read this but anyways ... both really need to work on , well everything, structure, imagery, creativity, vocab etc...

Octane gets my vote for having the better of the two verses

VOTE : OCTANE

[SPScarface215]

This was weak right here.... i'm with titan, yall were too basic and didnt do enough for the topic. It was a plain boring battle and I almost completely lost interest and wasn't gonna vote lol....

but anyway...

Vote: Octance