Reply With Quoteu droppin was pointless, and u got no pattern like I didn't even read it because it just looks too complicated..
tomorrow this will never be judged....heres next week verse off the top
a painter painting paragraphs, a master mastering a track, what it is to make a golden hit, never quite till ones life is over with, the struggle and the pain, apply pressure to the vains, stick out like a sore thumb, cut off nerves till your flows numb, bullshitting till the ohms resistence, lows and highs, ears bleed like noses from snow sniffen, cold eastern liven, twisted everyday to get through the next mission, could laugh it off like it was all written, whats the point of changing in these conditions, when we all gifted. its all based on the post you pivot, when the crossup puts it in your weak hand, instead of passing it off, you gotta seas grams, and no matter where you go, theres blood in the land, blood from crossing the fine line, onto someone elses plans,
stake your make, like you wear a branding plate, type model and date, i figured em all to be snakes, sea to shining sea, tricky mother fuckers going to great lengths, to try to distroy ones self asteem, breach of contract, contradictions molding the views that we have, losing all touch of where we started at, started back to far to call us man,
i shouldnt have to prove myself to no one... cause they should already know
u droppin was pointless, and u got no pattern like I didn't even read it because it just looks too complicated..
Random Thought
Thoughts begin Confession of a Junkie................
I linger throughout projects, stained with the essence of dope//
Stop is what the brain can‘t process, when injectin the coke/
Visualize individuals trying to rob then detectin I’m broke//
Homeless, lost contact with my folks, tried suicide, but god Keeps on catchin the rope//
Tears stream down my dried flesh, as the heart races inside chest, I finally realize stress//
Is the number one cause of mental detriments//
I wish art was permanent so I can stencil common sense//
I knew and could see how drug consuming obscured reality//
Making normal life seems transparent as it lured in personality//
Thought Changed.....Love, what is it
Is it a female with arms draped across a seed in the fetal position//
Wishing, life was wonderful just as it was in fiction’s descriptions//
Humanity in the womb was life lived with a silver spoon//
She was the suns lustrous essence, and I the plant, swallowing what she consumed//
So don’t picture photosynthesis//
picture love to the unborn in the simplest, most obvious elements//
No wait, rewind
Is love two opposite human begins attracted to one anothers vibe//
She’s positive, and I negative, two affectionate about what lies, inside each others eyes//I was on the deep end ,to ignorant to think for myself, to worried about were it begin//
then recovering the shell of myself from the depth.//
Thought Changed.......Battle Rhymes
You don’t even Bare a tone (baritone) so Consider tuning
This Cat bares bacteria , vets scared to consider grooming
Yeah, damn right, I’m super natural, flow elusive and to difficult
For simple individuals to visual the rhyme intervals
I Win...............
Last edited by ShadowBoxing89; 05-20-2007 at 10:48 PM.
aka complex symmetry
aka kidney
aka oral lepercy
aka ya mother
renasanz and shadow those two are gonna have to be entered for next week imma put the winner up by 2 or so my wi fis buggin downloading last nights simpsons and family guy so itll be a minute but ill definitely update today
This bitch said "Who the fuck died and made you god?" I said "Jesus". - Royce Da 5'9"
dude seriously the worst judge....c mil you around someone fucking judge
i shouldnt have to prove myself to no one... cause they should already know
Emcee Of The Week Week 37 Entry Thread>>>
Yall know, I'm in the middle of settling down at a new crib trying to maintain some stability between all my daily activities so keep it chill if I happen to miss a couple days here and there moderating Ill definitely be back without distraction or lazyness SOON...
for now, drop your best verses
This bitch said "Who the fuck died and made you god?" I said "Jesus". - Royce Da 5'9"
Im'a stay on my grind.. Everyday..(everyday)
Regardless what they say..im trying to get paid..
Hip Hops my life.. Theres no other way..
Aint no games here.. This aint no faze..
Im flippin through chapters in my new book..
Reacts finally here.. he's there.. LOOK !!
I might rob ya, i aint your normal crook..
My mans might pop ya cuz we aint shook
Aint no shakin hands.. I aint no faker man..
Going no where fast like a traffic jam
Its either ball, college, or traffickan
Earned my respect like them afrikans...
Dogg Im Street.. I might slap ya..
hated school why would i be a backpacker ?
everydays a new rapper whos a new actor
Is this why ? reacts getting passed up !!
I Speak for every soldier in the struggle..
You my brother while we up in this huddle..
The world is ours.. The Odds are far
If you miss one piece then we all fall..
Lifes a cheese game creepin in ya left lane
And the stress is giving me headpains..
Ima rapper.. Nothing esle to explain..
Its myself.. got no one else to blame..
i'm what i write in between the papers lines
Reflect and wish i could make up time
Lost friends in the end without no sign
U cant make shit.. without no grind..
yo.
speaking better then the brainless, on some anguish/
I deliver pain like a bad appendix, its horrendous/
the obstacles and the fences, I hurdle over like a gymnast/
or a track star, with bars that have truth and that have heart/
of the top I’m above sub par, meaning I cover the green with less effort then a golf cart/
easy does it im at one with, the grams like I put crackers in my lunches/
they a bunch of yuppie mother fuckers/
snitches by the inches, every path you walk you better not squawk/
or its strait to the d's office, where they always try to get you to talk/
like high school, the principle never quite understood my principal/
so he forgot to treat me like an individual/
evaded my rights, ya the punishments was outlandish/
sent the cops to my work, thinking I stole from my Miss Jandish/
so fuck em leave my daemons in the dark, and began to spark the nine mille shortly after I got dropped/
I can kill more soldiers then George W bush, and not have to go to war, just step off my porch/
Fuck it, fuck me battling for the emcee of the week, I should spend more time taking care of my teeth/
Cause ya they starting to get holes, no health insurance, and tons of debt at 24 years old/
Plus ive been off the books since I was 19, I change address’s, on my license, 1 year after I leave/
Keep ducking the law, state, feds, and the IRS/ my rents been due, but landlord aint evict me yet/
Cause he aint got the balls, see my barrel in his mouth, and with one shot split his jaws/
that’s it, this is me, Renasanz future of the R.O.C./
Roc city
i shouldnt have to prove myself to no one... cause they should already know
Emcee Of The Week 38 Entry Thread>>>
drop your best verse....Ill update in 7 days or so...lmao
dont get mad if Im not around its summer suckas!
This bitch said "Who the fuck died and made you god?" I said "Jesus". - Royce Da 5'9"
Tell me everyday Why i try that hard (tell me)
Why im on this block.. and i push that raw..(god)
I Cant blink twice.. Or I'll get ROBBED
I Cant think twice.. Cuz im breakin laws..
If you take mine.. Then im taking yours(yea)
Who want it ??(huh) Im breakin Jaws..(ohh)
Wrong Path.. Im So mistaken God !!(im sorry)
its all wrong and you cant play the cords..
I can play the block and the apartment hall(uh-huh)
Im in that bitch all day till the cops get called
Cuz you either pitch cane or you play ball(okay)
Either way you cant take no days off(nah)
I play the corner like 90 degrees..(yea)
5s and 10s.. I got whatever you need..
Holla at me.. Im the new hustlaz breed..
All day serving dem customers see.. (shit)
Like Moms hate her only son..(why??)
She regrets to see what i've become..(damn)
its not my fault.. the streets consoled me..
When no1 was there, It was the streets that would hold me
Yea yea.. the Street was my homies.. (uh)
Got a best friend.. but im still all by my lonly
Peoples passed.. Look at what you sold me(huh)
God damn.. I wish somebody had told me
*This is to that Dreamin - Young Jeezy beat.. Same Concept.. I Dont sell crack
Random Thought
Thoughts begin Confession of a Junkie................
I linger throughout projects, stained with the essence of dope//
Stop is what the brain can‘t process, when injectin the coke/
Visualize individuals trying to rob then detectin I’m broke//
Homeless, lost contact with my folks, tried suicide, but god Keeps on catchin the rope//
Tears stream down my dried flesh, as the heart races inside chest, I finally realize stress//
Is the number one cause of mental detriments//
I wish art was permanent so I can stencil common sense//
I knew and could see how drug consuming obscured reality//
Making normal life seems transparent as it lured in personality//
Thought Changed.....Love, what is it
Is it a female with arms draped across a seed in the fetal position//
Wishing, life was wonderful just as it was in fiction’s descriptions//
Humanity in the womb was life lived with a silver spoon//
She was the suns lustrous essence, and I the plant, swallowing what she consumed//
So don’t picture photosynthesis//
picture love to the unborn in the simplest, most obvious elements//
No wait, rewind
Is love two opposite human begins attracted to one anothers vibe//
She’s positive, and I negative, two affectionate about what lies, inside each others eyes//I was on the deep end ,to ignorant to think for myself, to worried about were it begin//
then recovering the shell of myself from the depth.//
Thought Changed.......Battle Rhymes
You don’t even Bare a tone (baritone) so Consider tuning
This Cat bares bacteria , vets scared to consider grooming
Yeah, damn right, I’m super natural, flow elusive and to difficult
For simple individuals to visual the rhyme intervals
aka complex symmetry
aka kidney
aka oral lepercy
aka ya mother
attitude adjustment, just became one with/
the beat the way the snare hit, got me on some rare shit/
prolly losing touch, like distance does to love/
banging other sluts, still that feeling aint enough/
doing sales weekly, but gas is climbing steeply/
fucking with these feigns, profits dont come easily/
i've peered the pressure, listen to the lectures/
examined all measures, but still i cant do better/
roled with the rugged type, slept with an open knife/
spoke to that filtered mic, made meaning in this simple life/
only trust myself, hustling abilities finaly bringing in some wealth/
tried to regulate my help, as long as my presence is felt/
i can be satisified with the luck im delt/
no ones perfect, no ones the best, im just trying to get a few paychecks
a head/
no ones perfect, no ones the best, just trying to get a little to live before
im dead/
*let me know what you all think i might go on to write more to this, im like 3 songs short for my lp*
i shouldnt have to prove myself to no one... cause they should already know
judgin today...threads closed until then
Last edited by Inept; 06-11-2007 at 01:52 PM.
This bitch said "Who the fuck died and made you god?" I said "Jesus". - Royce Da 5'9"
Emcee Of The Week (Week 40 ENTRY)
new week, 3 person participant minimium
no maximum
7 days to drop the verse (extended if minimum participant requirement is not met)
This bitch said "Who the fuck died and made you god?" I said "Jesus". - Royce Da 5'9"
I call this shit "The N"...
This is all off the dome I aint retyping shit from no notebook..
From earlier scriptures, it's been predicted I would loose in my life/
But the passion has been ignited, is what I use on the mic/
From standing in corners battling, abusing the cyph/
A backpacker, with conscious used in music to hype/
The N was well designed to be a fearless emcee/
Was never to be, despised but just honored in me/
The karma we'll see, the pain is what we trying to flee/
Poor countries fighting the battles that just happen to be/
For the first time, I experienced emotions that felt dormant/
For half of my life I've tried, so the drama has been shorten/
Witnessed to genocide, and family friends snorting/
Something that wasn't healthy the sequence had been important/
No inspiration inside me, all the writtens were true/
Non creative but the scriptures were enough to salute/
So ask away, peace to all who passed away/
Cus right now I feel like Hanks up in "Cast Away"/
Nothing to really eat and I just lost my friend/
Passenger seat, that could've been me in the accident/
All these emotions inside what could I Have been thinking/
Thank God that for that period I decided to stop drinking/
Its easy for one to judge, but hard for one to inspect/
Cus making a deal with evil what else should I had expect/
But forever I'll be the truest nigga that Im supposed to be/
The Hov in me had me cocky, put a boast in me...muhufukas...
Record:
71-11
give me a full page, i have lots of rage, to engage on this homade/
at a grown age, a youngster from the stone age/
whos sick of dealing with these fakes/
now a dayz, they must be all crazyed/
lost themselfs up in there myspace/
fucked the whole game, and lost sight of the paper trace/
these buisness peoples selling themselves/
but it aint them they selling, libraries cataloge they shelved/
but dont ask why im catching feelings/
im just sick of all the beatings/
the fist acuffs that had to much meaning/
where with a few drinks, you realise, you didnt do much healing/
they all bottled up, so we still remain rough,
still remain cutt from where our body pumps blood/
and at any age open heart surgery is going to cost to much/
i shouldnt have to prove myself to no one... cause they should already know
Im only seventeen Thats what they said to me
best believe after this they guna remember me ?
Will i succeed ?? (pause) or just need job openings
Fuck this rappin thing, a job is no longer happening
went from packing things.. to straight up stackin green
went from saggy jeans to emcees askin me..
how i keep it happening.. trust keep practicing
if all else fails, fuck it go back to trafficking
seen the harsh side of life without hbo or satellite
dont need a wife.. dont know if id treat her right ?
they all the hoeish type just like trina right..
and we all know how these hoes act alike..
laugh alike, dont see shit passed ur celulite
trying to pass the mic cuz i want some ass tonight..
its just u and me long as the math is right
dont get mad at life just make sure u add it right..
i think if i had read Flawless' verse.. I woulda switched it up lol.. Good ish tho
I'll judge this a little later its hardly 7 AM
This bitch said "Who the fuck died and made you god?" I said "Jesus". - Royce Da 5'9"
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