Topical Flow Archive [previous weeks threads merged here]

[Inept]

Yall know the deal


New Topic: Redemption

lets see some fire like last week

[Inept]

Its open...reeee-up!

[Pharaoh]

Blinded by guilt a quilt of pain covers my soul causin depression
Built my own horrors brain driven insane from acts of aggression
Didnt learn my lesson before it was to late my own fate sealed
Evils concealed behind bloodshot eyes and the weopons i'd weild
Shield crushed skulls swords lacerated spines and the torture of minds
Ecstacy felt as their hope would melt in their pain new orgasms i'd find
Till that fatefull day when my curse was perged and my soul re-emerged
In an instance my whole body jerked back all the pain i'd caused surged
Through my essence my whole presence was changed by it comin back
What was once black and deranged was now suffering for the deeds done
Now on a path of redemption and attonment my heart burns like the sun
In 2 million years I couldnt redeem for the bloodshed and tears I caused
Slaughtered my way through the centuries bagged more bodies than wars
Countless scores of victims n massacre scenes echoing through my head
Like banshee screams they'll torture n haunt my dreams till i'm finally dead
Now each day my quest is both blessed n cursed with hope n remorse
That before my days end i'll attone for the nightmares that I evilly caused

[Stainless]

I feel redeemed as if my life was in a constant fight wit hell/
and to prevail I had to conquer obstacles like bein in jail/
It was a jail this life I've led, bein trapped considered dead/
But end up frail forgetten by all the loved ones that I've mislead/
But let me take it back to 13 where it started /
On a block considered home but seen so many dearly departed/
My mother included my father was useless/
Who was I to be the man in charge I guess it's up to me to do this/
No excuses never knew this life could do this I'm a child/
Put me on the grind how? guess I better learn it now/
Look for work? who wants a child to run their buisness/
It's a man's world they told me go home and play, this ain't your interest/
What could I do I'm lost hit the streets pray to the boss/
If he gives me light I'll surely make it but instead, Lost/
Found another source to guide me thru these harsh times/
O.G.'s on my block showed me how to grind, get in line/
Take that pack to school flip it, bring it all back/
At 15 payed the rent off that cooked crack imagine that/
Pops loved it told me move up and copp weight/
Wait, something doesn't seem right, he led me astray/
Everyday story weed and rap's how I pulled thru/
Wrote my pain down expressin how I lived and what it made me do/
Who was you to tell me I was wrong in this life/
16 thinking that I knew life, yeah right/
17 copped my first gun hold it down learn to shoot/
If they come squeeze and run don't look back it's them or you/
That's all they ever told me never knew the full story/
25's the penalty behind the gates witout the glory/
I'm thankin God grateful now that it never came down/
To me taking someone else's life for holding my ground/
But it still led to much worse 18 my life was cursed/
Neighbors said that boy sell so much drugs it can't worse/
21 they locked me up wit all these killers and thieves/
My world changed from hard work to working hard to get free/
Somebody please redeem me, deliver me from evil/
And as I said it God opened up the cell gave me a preview/
Of what this life could be livin free witout these blocks/
Cause all it did was block me from a life headed strait to the top/
Now I see this life clearly wit the rain and the misery/
And the tears combined to make these tracks this rap game needs me/
Show the truth in life for ghetto youth seeking the light/
If my experiences influence one then I've earned my life.........

[Inept]

Topic: Independence

The Winning Post For Last Week

[Inept]

aiiight re-up the topics up for this week

[Stainless]

I just want to be my own man free of burden/
free to live out my passion express what's most certain/
Cursin the day music and corperate became married/
Of course divorce should've proceeded but times had me/
Doin it anyway but doin it my way/
wasn't good enough to put 'em up over the air waves/
Where they play what they think we'll love/
If I was given one chance would they sign me or shrug? I guess we'll never know/
Should've took it to the extreme like revolution/
When this country fought for independence, the soulution,/
Came at the cost of bloodshed this game is called dead/
but no war to save what's ours/
My solution go independent take back power/
Turn back hours where music was free but still ours/
Steel hour in the middle of chaos, must fight that power/
Every CD sold, is a brick in the tower/
Empires that were once devoured/
Show the struggle of a dream to be independent/
If they shouted freedom or death you know they meant it/
If I die on my last breath they'll finish my sentence/
Gimmie freedom or your life is ended/
Matter of fact my release'll be independent/
To ensure that the music is the way I left it/
Not some Pac unapproved nonsense that's censored/
,Preserve my legacy for the fans to prosper/
So the message stays in tact ain't it worth the slaughter/
Think about it they say Christ died for what he taught/
guess the church was the "label" that recorded his thoughts/
They say Martin Luther died for his dream of peace/
Was it worth trying to change government thru speech/
Taught us independent thought either live or die/
When Malcolm X went independent Islam tried/
By any means necessary to conceal his life/
Even Pac for trying to go independent Suge took his life/
Big tried to leave Bad Boy lost his life/
Freedom comes at a high price take it in blood/
Ready to die for the things you love/
Goin independent might lead to up above.........

[Inept]

haha...wooo re up for another entry i aint goin by no default

[Inept]

the winner of last week finna be posted shortly...go head n drop ya shit for the new week

[Renasanz]

going to try and step shit up some more and switch up my style little bit..less spoken word.

pistol toten, backpack strolen, headphones keep me coasting like an ocean/
as i ship out the hoods fortune/ im eating, your eating but dont take my portien/ or ill drop you like porcelen, bleed like an abortion/ leave the mother fucker weak in the knees/ my footprints bleached like your t's/ covering my tracks like herion addicts, lying to the d's/ spilt bitches like a dutch, then make em leave/ im sick of these emces/ telling me/ to up my status, fucker flip my matress/ you'll find my talents/ shooter game tite, greet your casket/
black suit and black hat but i dont do magic/ but ill huedeni a nigga like a bad habbit/ on a new years eve trying to kick it/ she try to mimick my car with her lipstick/ liked how i bragged bout my nite stick/ she want me to beat her pussy like some king shit/ i told her she was flippen/ but then she dropped down and started singing/ gotta get off this topic/ upper cut you fucks like im boxing/ but nobodys watching/ while im cooking up my cuncoction/ my lyrics you sample and rob em/ make me disaper like an unwanted option/
but ill come back to be a rarity/ im to deep for you dudes to see/ you cant murk me/ i'm a leach/ sucking till you have nothing left to bleed/


i wrote it in this form so you have to peep it out instead of just skim it over...
if you want me to highlight all the bullshit in there and break it all up i guess i can but it just takes out the fun...seriously when you listen to something your not handed the punchlines, your not handed all the fucking inner meaning between the lines. you just listen and you learn suckaz

[$poke!]

Redemption!!


finally, i took control of this fucked up situation
niggas hating and faking just waitin' for there lives to be takin'
I patiently waited, took my time plotted, planned and schemed
slowly creeped while they were sleep to wake'm out of thier dreams!
Now this wasn't all in one night, more like one a month!
but back to the first nigga as I woke'm up!
remember that bullshit you kicked, kick now with this glock to your temple!
Nobodies home with you and this silencer makes it all the more simple!
Got'm chokin " I wa I was just pl playing im sorry!"
I didn't m'mean it I was j'jokin but you took it so harsly!
Need to know the fuck to say, I ain't nobodies bitch!
Pull tha hammer back fuckin' wit'm pulled it and click!
Smacked'm with the pistol grip, knocked'm out tied'm up!
duck taped his mouth, hitt'm with tha glock again to wake the bitch up!
Shit ain't funny now, before wit ya boys you was talk and giggles!
kicked the chair he fell on his face, noggin split down the middle!
Picked'm up again, go more question answer'm clown!
what happened to all that tough talk, what you cryin for now!
Let me break it down, and smack tha bitch with every statement I make!
wit the pistol grip across his face, why the fuck you hate?*smack*
who you think I am? *smack*, told you I would get you *smack*
how you like that *smack* you wont do it again*smack*
this is'll happen to your friends**smack**
Now that i've got my point across, and your friends will follow!
cock the hammer back filled this niggaz heads wit hollo's
**Street Redemption**

[C^Mil]

I made this verse a few nights ago to a song im doin this weekend, so any critiques would be much appreciated...the songs called "I Will Survive"..

On the rubix cube o' life stay sittin at square-one,
Get on the right track then right back cuz here-comes/
(the) talk thru ear-drums whispers and sneers-from,
haters and fan alike be shiites cheerin//
hearin u ruthless and ya death is never-mourned,
in turn used that grabbed life by the devil-horns/
So never scorned u monkeys hide ya dissin-me-joints,
cuz yall like playin five centers ..stay missin-the-point//
Remember I-was shy-cuz was ridin the white-bus,
at times-was life-less thinkin i might-just//
take-my-own fate choke break-my-bones,
but strayed-to-flowin its hom so try and take-the-throne//
u chitter-chat I spit-a-rap cuz life-is-a-long-stint,
ADD that BULSSHIT in my life-is-a-constant//
But I'll survive...the skin's same-as-armour,
plus im married to the game (and) life's the maid-of-honour//

[Jthamind]

WHEN IT RAINS, THE WORLD FREEZES TO A HALT TO LISTEN
TO DROPS OF GODS TEARS AS THEY FALL IN SYMBIOTIC RHYTHMS
INTERMINGLED WITH THE BEATS OF A MILLION HEARTS RACING
AS IF TIME STOOD STILL WITH THE SANDS OF TIME PACING
THE WORLD TO CONFORM TO THE STANDARDS OF TIMES MADNESS
AS WHEN A HEART BEAT SKIPS DUE TO AN UNEXPECTED SADNESS
THE COLD AIR BLOWING A BREEZE OF OLD THINGS KNOWING
THE NIGHT SKY IS RADIANT LIKE ITS FIRST AND FINAL SHOWING
BUT THE WARMTH OF HEARTS BEATING PREVENTS THE SKY’S SNOWING
THE TAPPING OF DROPS RESEMBLE THAT OF A METRONOMES CLACKING
AS TIME STANDS STILL TO FEEL WHAT THE SKY HAVE BEEN HOLDING
TIMES LIKE THIS LEAD MINDS AND HEARTS REARED FOR REFLECTION
ON FEELINGS OF THINGS PAST RESULTING FROM A LOST OF DIRECTION
AS RAIN DROPS REMINISCENT OF TEARS FROM HEARTS SENT REALING
PROVING EVIDENT THEIR IMPORTANCE IN THE PRESENTATION OF FEELING
TRUTH REVEALED AS TIME DOES MOVE AND STANDS STILL FOR NEITHER
HEARTS SCORN OR FEELINGS TORN BUT WE FAILED AS TRUE BELIEVERS
WE ARE BUT SHALLOW INFIDELS TRAPPED IN OUR OWN SAD SPELLS
WOLLOWING IN THE WATERS LEFT BY BLACK SKYS LONE TEAR SWELLS
TRUTH IS WE FAIL DAILY BUT FAIL TO REMEMBER THAT REPENTENCE
IS ALWAYS AN OPTION GIVEN FOR US TO RECTIFY EXISTANCE
AS THE LIGHT SHINES ON US ALL AND WE WILL RETURN TO FAVOR
BECAUSE THE TEARS OF DARK SKYS ARE SENT FOR US TO SAVOR
BATHE IN THESE, WATERS SENT FROM SKYS NORTHERN HEMISPHERE
AND GAIN APPRECIATION, FOR THESE WATERS ARE THE SAME THAT BROUGHT US HERE
THO WE STRAY LIKE DOGS WITH LEASHES UNLATCHED AND CAST OUT
LEFT TO FEED IN THE STREETS OF OUR OWN HEARTS AND MINDS PLAN AN ILL ROUTE
WHEN IT RAINS, INDEED THE WORLD HALTS BUT STILL FAILS TO LISTEN
THAT WITH THE RIGHT LIGHT, WE SHINE LIKE 8TH LIGHTS IN THE DEVINE PRISM.
AS RAIN DROPS TAP AND RATTLE ON LIKE OLD STORIES OF GLORYS PAST
IF YOU CAN’T GET OUT OF THE RAIN…ENJOY EVERY DROP LIKE IT’S YOUR LAST

[Inept]

shiiet forgot about this...ill update it by tonight im madd tired been up since 6 am shit is too much for me haha

[LyriQ47]

In the pits of my sin
The flame within
I explode
like tin
full of gasoline
set with the flames of hell
As I ripped through the demon hands
telling me
that I will never make it to the top
I've sined to the point I can't be redeemed
but the redeemer told me
I have a chance
So I continue to dance
pass the sinful hands
that try to pull me past, but I blow past
the evils of the hell I built for my self
I once I correct my self, I will be showered with wealth
I found myself in a casket
unable to be free
but the latch was sin city
And I kicked and kicked
and pushed coffin wide open
I was covered in dirt, but then I started floating
came out the pool that washed away my sins
In the battle of the Angel and the Devil
God always wins