it was in a paragrahp so the line might look weird

[Common sense]: and yes yes yall and u dont stop,to the beat yall and you dont stop
12 yall and you dont stop, common sense yall and you dont stop,
and yes yes yall and u dont stop, yo common sense gotta be a sure shock

when dis life is ova,
or in other words when my love of music dies,
i hope i still can look into her eyes and remembery why i loved her,
embraced her, took her out on a few dates but we were doing more den just dating,
some days we stayed in not only when it was rainin, just stared at her and listen to what she was sayin
also playin music 4 her keep her entertained, but even tho we were loves our friendship we maintained,
we were like a picture hung up in da same frame, but we played da same games like i wouldnt call her in a minute
but right when i thought our love was gonna when i thought it was finished,
u called me and pull me bac in it,and for dat i thank u
u didnt makin feel lonely u made me feel special
and this whole fallin in love i neva meant to,
but i guess in life u make mistakes, and i guess dis was a good one,
i asked u if u were seeing some one esle u said i was da only one u loved,
but one day i seen u hangin out wit dis thug, u treated him like he was me and i heard u gave him more den just a hug
didnt leave u cuz my heart was still in love, but still wondering how u could of played me after all da things we'ed done,
even tho we apart my love for u didnt stop, da person im talkin about yall is hiphop

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